Wrath of a demon [OOC]

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  1. Darth Typho Destiny Islands Resident

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    Story / Intro

    First of, the story is Kingdom Hearts, takes place after Dream Drop Distance. A newcomer, an antrhomorphic serpent by the name of Argone, as come to the Kingdom Hearts galaxy, and has taken a great interest in the keyblade. Yensid soon senses a new coming change, and sends Sora and Riku to investigate. Soon they find strange looking soldiers, all of them wielding keyblades. Now they have to find out how all these people got keyblades, which ones got their keyblades naturally, and which ones seem to be using a mysterious method, that allows them to have one, worthy or not. And Xehanort seems to have taken in interest in this as well.
    Okay, that's some of the plot, but I don't want to spoil the whole thing. An rp where you know all the plot elements is boring. Now I am going to need somone to rp as Sora, and Riku, I can rp as Yensid and Xehanort, and some others. Other official characters are welcome too. As for what worlds will be in this rp, I am open to suggestions. But you may also bring in your own characters, keybladers or not. They do not have to have any specific age, or anything, just as long as they are good, not over powered characters

    Rules

    No godmodding
    No unnecessary language

    OOC Sheet


    Age
    Apperance
    Weapon
    Bio (optional)
    Personality
     
  2. Darth Typho Destiny Islands Resident

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    Nothing? Am I doing something wrong? If so, could someone please explain to me what that is.
     
  3. Jayn

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    Moved to OOC so you can get some assistance.

    I'll help you out as soon as I'm on a computer. (On my tablet atm) c':
     
  4. Darth Typho Destiny Islands Resident

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    Oh, um, okay, thanks.
     
  5. Jayn

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    First, nothing's wrong with your writing or anything. I suggest you take a look here. This will teach you the basics regarding RP creation. In most cases (but not all), an OOC (out of character) thread comes first. In this thread you would explain exactly what was going on in the role play, any rules you have set up and you should also provide a character sheet (or an OC form) for people.

    So basically from this thread, you should consider writing up a story line that this role play will be following, some rules, and an oc form that members can fill out before they join.

    If you need any more help, or some more extensive explanations or one-on-one guidance, you should take a look here. Any of the members listed in that thread are willing to help you!

    Another good method is to just take a look around the OOC form yourself and see how other's lay out their role plays.

    Good luck.

    Anyone else is free to help as well. 8)
     
  6. Darth Typho Destiny Islands Resident

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    Thank you very much for your help. :)[DOUBLEPOST=1355612598][/DOUBLEPOST]Okay, let's see if I can do this right. First of, the story is Kingdom Hearts, takes place after Dream Drop Distance. A newcomer, an antrhomorphic serpent by the name of Argone, as come to the Kingdom Hearts galaxy, and has taken a great interest in the keyblade. Yensid soon senses a new coming change, and sends Sora and Riku to investigate. Soon they find strange looking soldiers, all of them wielding keyblades. Now they have to find out how all these people got keyblades, which ones got their keyblades naturally, and which ones seem to be using a mysterious method, that allows them to have one, worthy or not. And Xehanort seems to have taken in interest in this as well.
    Okay, that's some of the plot, but I don't want to spoil the whole thing. An rp where you know all the plot elements is boring. Now I am going to need somone to rp as Sora, and Riku, I can rp as Yensid and Xehanort, and some others. Other official characters are welcome too. As for what worlds will be in this rp, I am open to suggestions. But you may also bring in your own characters, keybladers or not. They do not have to have any specific age, or anything, just as long as they are good, not over powered characters. Okay, did I do this right? Does that cover what I need to do?
     
  7. CrownMoksha Decimo

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    Well, there still rules and OC sheet if their allowed.
     
  8. Darth Typho Destiny Islands Resident

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    Well, what kind of rules should I make? And OC sheet?
     
  9. CrownMoksha Decimo

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    Just put stuff that people can't do as rules and as for OC sheet well the BAsic one is

    Name
    Age
    Apperance
    Weapon
    Bio (optional)
    Personality

    But, you can add anything you want.
     
  10. Darth Typho Destiny Islands Resident

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    Age
    Apperance
    Weapon
    Bio (optional)
    Personality


    And no godmodding, uneccessary language, and... that's all I think. Okay, now what do I do? ^^;
     
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    Once all that's set, all you can do is wait and see who's interested in it.
     
  12. Darth Typho Destiny Islands Resident

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    Do I move this out of OOC or something, or am I all set? Now I wait?
     
  13. CrownMoksha Decimo

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    This is the place for all OOC thread beside only the moderator can move threads around.
     
  14. Darth Typho Destiny Islands Resident

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    Okay, so now that I have done everything, now what?
     
  15. Jayn

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    Now, you should edit your first post and add the story, rules and OOC sheet. It should end up looking something like this--but be as creative with it as you want.

    Story / Intro

    First of, the story is Kingdom Hearts, takes place after Dream Drop Distance. A newcomer, an antrhomorphic serpent by the name of Argone, as come to the Kingdom Hearts galaxy, and has taken a great interest in the keyblade. Yensid soon senses a new coming change, and sends Sora and Riku to investigate. Soon they find strange looking soldiers, all of them wielding keyblades. Now they have to find out how all these people got keyblades, which ones got their keyblades naturally, and which ones seem to be using a mysterious method, that allows them to have one, worthy or not. And Xehanort seems to have taken in interest in this as well.
    Okay, that's some of the plot, but I don't want to spoil the whole thing. An rp where you know all the plot elements is boring. Now I am going to need somone to rp as Sora, and Riku, I can rp as Yensid and Xehanort, and some others. Other official characters are welcome too. As for what worlds will be in this rp, I am open to suggestions. But you may also bring in your own characters, keybladers or not. They do not have to have any specific age, or anything, just as long as they are good, not over powered characters

    Rules

    No godmodding
    No unnecessary language

    OOC Sheet


    Age
    Apperance
    Weapon
    Bio (optional)
    Personality

    ----------------------

    Once you edit your first post, NOW you make a thread where you made one before, and you can start the rp there. People can join here, in this thread.
     
  16. Darth Typho Destiny Islands Resident

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    Hey, thank you so much for all your help. :)[DOUBLEPOST=1355724516][/DOUBLEPOST]General Argone OOC Sheet

    Age: Mid 30's
    Apperance: An anthropomorphic serpent, wears a red general's uniform, as well as a cloak, that used to be white, but is now dark red.
    Weapon: Is well versed in dozens of martial arts, but is not above using his claws or fangs, though he prefers to used his prize sword, made from some of the most unbreakable metals known in the galaxy.
    Personality: Charismatic, intimidating, manipulative, cunning, ruthless, and a savage fighter[DOUBLEPOST=1355793178][/DOUBLEPOST]So have I done everything right now? Got this thread in OOC, and the new on in the RP arena, anything I missed ,or anything at all?
     
  17. Itachilives Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I will join - will make my oc later today
     
  18. Darth Typho Destiny Islands Resident

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    Yay! Sweet! :)
     
  19. Darth Typho Destiny Islands Resident

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    Feels like this thread is kind of dying... :(