It's been a long time since we've seen each other I didn't think much of that at first But as the days went by, I realized something I kept thinking about you and missing you so much I can't breath whenever images of you enter my mind My mouth becomes empty whenever I try to speak about you But no one would understand my feelings Feeling like the concrete angel, I waited for the torture to stop As they mocked the girl who became from a unknown place Waiting for the moment to come that we would see each other again I prayed that the departed souls of my family would watch over you Holding onto the final words we spoke together, my lips become dry My family tells me to move on, to forget my old friends and make new ones But how can I not miss the ones I held so dear to me? Now I know I must be strong, I must be brave to endure the pain And try to walk away from old memories But I always try to think about you, and wondered to myself, 'When can I see you again?' Sigh.... A new poem, this one really expressing my sadness of leaving dear friends. My classmate really do mock me, just because I like different things. Like Kingdom Hearts, Final Fantasy. I just hope, I will see my old friends again.
I like the poem, only downside is i had to highlight all the text to read it, might want to choose a darker font next time :) On the plus side, awesome poem, I really liked your wording in one spot in particular: Feeling like the concrete angel, I waited for the torture to stop Don't ask me why, but it sold the work to me. Well done.
