Original scan (for the most part): Spoiler Edited image (color, enhancements, etc.): Spoiler Finished image (for now): Spoiler
Not bad, the clothes look nice, especially in the colored version. The only things I could say are make the ears larger (but that might be because I like big ears), shade the face a bit, and make the mouth a little more... realistic? Also don't draw on lined paper. c:
Thanks. I suck at ears and mouths, and shading's uber hard x.x I didn't plan to, but I has no copying paper ._.