Oooh, that was a great movie. ^^. Alright... Firstly, I can see the flow you have going in the Background effects, but I'm not really seeing it in the stock. Maybe rotate it a little? The next thing that really stands out to me is the lack of Foreground effects. I can see the line going around her (which I'm not really in love with, either), but that's really it. Move the light source over to the right a little. If you look at the stock, you can see she's facing towards the light, whereas your light source is covering her entire body, as if she were standing right below the light. Add some negative space & FG effects, and I'd say you're good to go. Nice job.
