Who Could Ever Love a Nobody? (SoraxOC)

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  1. Dawn King's Apprentice

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    This all coming from this one's point of view. Reply if I need to work on anything.
    Who Could Ever Love a Nobody?​

    Prologue
    "Jerk."

    "Brat!"

    "You stay out of this!"

    "Screw you!"

    "I'm warning you!" My voice rose dangerously higher as my supervisors kept on infuriating me, even though I can't. Maybe it is because of their presence or I'm on edgy at the moment.

    Just a while ago I'm in my own 'room' reading childish stories such as Winnie the Pooh or Spot, then those two knocked down the door and let themselves in.

    Because I live in a library, of course I don't carelessly leave my things lying around for anyone to look at. They caught me listening something I wasn't suppose to hear of old aged woman telling a story to a girl about my age.

    "You can't fool us, Jinx. Admit it; you have nowhere to go, not even to your stupid little home!"

    "I still can, Even, Dilan, I'll prove it to you ten years from here that I still have what it takes!"

    The door opened without any knocking while the three of us continue to bicker, not caring who comes through the broken door. There stood Xehanort looking at the scene and shook his head in disapproval.

    "Again? Ienzo sent me to tell you two to bring the 'experiment', but I guess my work is cut off for me." He sat down in a lounge chair, watching us amused.

    "So what is it now this time?" Xehanort was the first person I met when I arrived at the lab. He had been so kind to me and made me feel welcomed; I knew I could trust him my secrets and problems.

    "To see if I can regain what is stolen from me in a decade." I responded.
    He waved his hand to dismiss the two behind me.


    He put both of his hands on my shoulders then kneeled so he's up to my eye level.

    "You know how much this means to him. Just wait a little bit longer and we'll let you go."

    "Yeah while you're at it, might as well erase my memories."

    My best friend frowned. "Are you sure? Knowing you are different from most kids your age has what you'll never get in ten years."

    I shrugged it off, glared at him, and looked away.

    "At least keep some memories to make you pursue further into eternity."

    "You should remove my parent's existence."

    "But they…"

    "They call me wretched child, a curse. I was not meant to exist!"

    That is one topic a baby wouldn't forget. A prophet told them while my 'mom' was five months old that I will bring destruction to the world. Both of them plan to kill me the moment I was born than do abortion but somehow I survived by a savior.

    Never get to meet that person but if I ever did meet again, I would show him or her my gratitude.
     
  2. Xx Axel xX Traverse Town Homebody

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    interesting!

    It sounds good, and it's detailed. I think you can go somewhere with this. Keep it up, and I'll read the rest.
     
  3. Dawn King's Apprentice

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    Who Could Ever Love a Nobody?

    Chapter 1: Unforgivable Invasion​

    I couldn't figure out where I am or what's going on. I remember receiving a sleeping dose then my mind just completely blank out. There's noise of distress everywhere around me. Women and children are crying and screaming in my ears.

    My mind doesn't understand the meaning of this. As I am confuse between the taste on my hands and listening to men's angry shouts. Among the objects they are holding is a sword, torch, and a pitchfork. My instinct tells me to stay away even though I have never encountered them before.


    There's a sweet aroma filling the air: fear. It is very close, yet I don't know why I could smell it.

    I search using my ears at least a whimpering noise; it shivers all over my body.

    "Hello there, who are you?" A female voice asked.

    I curse myself standing out in the open. "I'm Jinx, Miss Beautiful Lady." I replied her facial beauty cannot go unnoticed.

    The male brunette is the same age as her has short brown hair. "Riona! There you are; I've been…" He stopped in mid-sentence and look at me.

    "What's wrong mister is there something troubling you?" I ask innocently.

    "Squall, is there something wrong?" The one named Riona asks concerned.

    The one I learned the name as Squall shook his head and offered a hand out to her. She smiles and accepts it.

    Something snaps at the back of my mind as I subconciously grab a quartz jewel and jerk it out. Squall, the only witness, grabs his sword and starts slashing at me.


    When we knew we were losing breath, I use my right hand sharp as claws and made contact with his face. Crimson liquid drops to the ground right between his eyes.

    "So...are...Heartless." He said in between his pants.

    "What?" I ask as my breathing level returns to normal.

    He points to the ground. An ant-like figure parts itself from the ground. Surely, it has glowing yellow eyes.

    "Forget it. What is the most important thing here is you lost someone very dear to you." I said as I point where I first saw her.

    He turns around but when he looks back, I was gone.

    Let me know what you think.
     
  4. lookaheartless Twilight Town Denizen

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    Ooh, I like it, I like it!

    Keep going with it, please?
     
  5. Dawn King's Apprentice

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    Ok LAH :D Let's get this started!
    Who Could Ever Love a Nobody?

    Chapter 2: Punishment

    Braig picks me off the floor. "You have been a very bad girl." I couldn't see him clearly, everything is blurry. "W-what are you talking about?" The doors burst open and I could hear four footsteps rushing in.

    "You know what you have just done?"

    "What has done is done in the past." The second voice talked to the first.

    "But it is an outrage!" The second, I believe it is Even, exaggerated.

    "HE will have our heads for sure." The third sounded like Elaeus.

    "Everyone calm down." All the scientists quiet down. "Our only solution is to remove the evidence and we got to send Jinx somewhere else."

    Braig allows me sit down on a chair and discuss with his fellow members.

    All of them dressed in scientist's cloak grab one of my limbs and lift me into the air. I close my eyes shut then I hear a huge slam. I woke up with a jolt.


    "I'm sorry Jinx." Ienzo apologize through a microphone. Now my vision is back to normal. Grr... at a bad timing too. "This is your punishment for harming innocent lives."

    I shook my head violently in denial. "No." I whisper to myself.

    "NO!" I shouted louder.

    "Sorry, we have no choice." Even replies.

    "You can't do this!"

    The Gummi Ship's engine starts up. Something inside of me tells me it hurts. I look back at the ship and it read auto. I turn around and Ienzo smiles weakly and waves. That was the last time I ever saw them and I'll never forget it.

    Sora and Riku are coming up soon enough!
     
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