When FMA comes to Earth

Rip off of Mexony's " When KH Come To Earth" So um... yeah...

Chapter 1: The two E's
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Down at USA, NJ, a girl with brown eyes and brown-ish black hair was just bored at home. She was on the computer, listening to a version of Carol Of the Bells. It was about 8:00 p.m. where she was. She looked outside her window. The sky was pretty much black outside her window. She sighed. There was nothing to do. She looked out her window and said, "I wish that one of my favorite animes would be real...", she sighed again, "Like that would happen." She put on her favorite pajamas, they were a sky blue with clouds and stars. After putting the on, she fell asleep on her bed at 9:30.
On the next morning, she went down stairs, rubbing her eyes. It was Saturday. She's not used to waking up at 8:00. She'd usually stay up late. The doorbell rang. 'I bet its my friend from next door...', she thought. She walked to the front door and found that it was a short kid with his blond hair in a ponytail. He had a long red coat with red and had gloves. Eden, the girl, groaned. "What do you want, shorty? I'm tired." The boy started to yell. "I'M 14, DAMMIT!!! I'M NOT SHORT, I'M STILL GROWING!!!" Eden was still lazily rubbing her eyes, " And I'm 11 and I'm still growing too... Come in." The boy walked in and sat on a red velvet couch. Eden sat on another couch.
" What's your name, shorty?", Eden asked. The boy looked up, angry, but tried his best not to yell. "I-I'm Edward Elric." Eden looked at him with her arm on her eye, she froze when Edward said his name while she was rubbing her right eye. "Edward...Elric?"
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And that's it. Comment and say of you have a character that you want to be in. Like I said, it's a rip off of Mexony's When KH comes to Earth. Just give your character's name, age, personality, and bio. And don't forget where your character is on Earth.

 

It's nice. I had to lolz at this XP Hey can ya put my char in- if that's whatcha mean. The usual in the Rps ya made :) Cause if that's not watcha mean, I'm making a fool of my self -_-

 

Next chapter.... I don't own FMA...

Chapter 2: Another Friend, Another Place
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Eden stared. How could this be the Edward Elric, The FullMetal Alchemist? Maybe it was a really random, but good, cosplay person. She got up and started to pull on Ed's ponytail braid. Ed clapped his hands to make the velvet on the couch pull Eden into the air. "Put me down! I get it, you're the real deal!", she said through gritted teeth. Ed used his alchmey to put Eden down and the velvet slithered in it's original position.
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In New York, one of Eden's favorite places, a girl named Sharix whom lived with her aunt was bored. She was left alone while her aunt went grocery shopping. Somone knocked on the door. Sharix opened the front door and saw a man in armor. She frowned and folded her arms as if this was a joke. "Hey, bud... Y'know this is the year 2007? Cause your stuck in medevil times." The man bowed saying sorry, and then said, "I'm just looking for my brother, that's all. He has blond hair that's in a ponytail braid, he has a long red coat, and has gloves. Oh! And he's kinda short.", the man had a childish voice. "My name is Alphonse Elric, my brother, Edward Elric." Sharix just stared. How was this possible? This boy was Alphonse Elric? How...?
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And that's all I've got.... Wow... This chapter was boring...

 

ooh! how cool, though I had to lol about it abit- that's almost the exact thing i imagined XP rock on! ^^

 

Thanks! I made sure to put more of your character was in it more, darkheart418 and I have lots of time since it's sunday.

Chapter 3: 2 Places and 4 Kids, and Don't Forget The Ramen!
Part 1
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"Are you hungry, Ed? I've got some ramen in the kitchen that I can make.", Eden asked. Ed nodded and Eden went to the kitchen. The kitchen was mostly painted, a light tea-ish color. There were two lamps, one lit the room midly, and the other lit the table. Before making the ramen, she poured some milk in a cup with an evil smile. She knew Ed hated milk, but she wanted him to act like a silly child, to get her nerves untangled from sleep.
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Sharix still stared. Alphonse waved to see if Sharix was still on Earth, she seemed not to be paying attention to anything. Sharix, still out of it, led Al to her home and sat on the couch. Then she remembered an episode of FMA when Al was the Philosepher's Stone. She got scared, what if Al used alchemy and it would nearly blow her up?! It may destroy her and she might go to the heavens with her parents and brother.
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Eden walked back to the living room, and gave the milk to Edward. Purposely putting it on the glass table to make sure he would see the white milk. Ed stared in wide eye, that got on his nerves. "I HATE MILK!!! I HATE IT HATE HATE HATE HATE MILK!!!!" Eden smiled and fell on the floor, holding her gut from laughter. Ed was just rambling at how he hated milk. She somehow managed to get up and go to the kitchen for the ramen.
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And that's it.... Not much for a cliff-hanger but hey, I gave it my best shot.

 

So far I've read it really good:) And I mean it, i'm sure this'll be a good story.

 

Thanks Mexony! That means alot, coming from you.

 

same here. It's really awsome! ^^

 

Thanks guys! I really appreciate this. Even if the idea was a bit copyright... I'm surprised how it turned out.

 

i am shocked about this.... noone has given you a new character. mine is :

Name: Bones
Age: 15
Weapon of choice: Scythe & energy
Personality: sadist (enjoys to watch others in pain[mainly people he hates but he hates it when his friends are hur])
Bio: lives in an abondend house that no one can tear down because he has the deed to the building

is FMA= Full Metal Alchemist?

 

FMA= Full metal Alchemist. Did you even read my chapters?

Chapter 3: 2 Places, 5 Kids , 1 Homonculi, and Don't forget the Ramen!
Part 2
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In a house on Staten Island, abandoned. Or, so it would seem to the people around it. Really, a teenager was living alone, people have wondered for awhile about why it wasn't torn down. Though, one person stared at it giving an evil smile. It was a boy with a feminine appearence. He walked up to the house door and kicked it down. "Hey! Someone live here?! Cause it seems too clean for an abandoned house!" A teenager came from a room, supposedly the kitchen. " Thisismy house, now get out before I get my sythe!" The man, who kicked the door down, grinned. " I see you crave for power. Not a bad choice."
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Eden just started to make the ramen. She put water in two of the quick ramens and then in the microwave and set it for two minutes and thirty seconds.
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Sharix was still scared about her thought of Al being the Philospher's Stone. What if Alphonse changed all reality into choas by preforming siple alchemy?! She didn't know what to do.
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Wow.... THIS CHAPTER SUCKED!!!

 

no i could only get on at school.

 

That's what you think. I like it! Keep going I'd want to hear more! ^^