Digital Art "What is this 'heart'?"

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Bushy, Apr 24, 2012.

  1. Bushy "Don't think. Imagine!"

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    Been a while since I posted here... but, I made this and it's turned out better than I thought it would.
    This was complete improvisation, and it ended up completely different from how I first imagined, but yeah.
    I'd like some good old CnC please. XD

    Tear into it!
     
  2. Feenie Finny, Fin of the Feenie Fish

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    Ooh, not bad Bushy. Not bad at all.

    I like the colour scheme of the tag. Fits the theme of the characters (whoever they are) pretty nicely.
    The shape of it is also fairly interesting, if not a bit unusual, but it works, nonetheless.

    Now, the parts I dislike.
    There just doesn't seem to be a set focal for the image. It's very hard to focus on just one thing, because both of the characters pull my attention away from the other.
    Added to this, the text is also a bit to attention catching. Not so much the smaller patch of it, but the part on the very edge.
    Try limiting the amount of focals on screen, or else things get a bit messy.
    Other than that, the image just seems a bit blurred out. Use a high quality image next time ^_^

    But yeah, not bad at all. Keep trying!
     
  3. Shiki my waifu is better than yours, thanks

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    This is great and all, but I think it would look better as two different pieces than just one smooshed together.

    Also, I do not understand the "Bushy Brow" text looking so prominent in the diamond. Maybe having it somewhere small and not right there would help you.
     
  4. Makaze Some kind of mercenary

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    You have generally good composition and wonderful colour choice. I like all of the elements you used but your name.

    For criticism, you basically took things you like and tried to stuff them together. As Weeaboo and Feenie said, it looks kind of slapped together and there is no focal point. The way that the first stock of Ulquiorra is a fading diamond looks bad and out of place. If you are going to blend it, then blend it completely. It looks unprofessional if you can still see the diamond edge, and like Weeaboo said, it looks like you took two tags and just put one on top of the other.

    With your name, you have it sitting there in the middle of the image flatly. Try turning it to fit the curve of the diamond and lay it along that at a lower opacity so that it blends. For instance:

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    For emphasis:

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    Or something along those lines.

    There is also this stray speck below the left side of the diamond for no apparent reason. Do you see it?

    Keep it up with the good colour and text choices, though. This is your best tag yet.