Traditional Art Well I don't draw much...

...At least not excessively for the past two years. But I drew this earlier today and decided to post it:



I'm pretty sure that the upper and lower part of the body are out of proportion and I know I need to get better pencils, but that's all that really stuck out to me.

So what do you all think?

 

This has a lot of promise. Most of the proportions are good. I'd ease up just a little bit on the pencils; the outlines are a little too big for my taste, and the pencils on features like the nose and certain parts of the clothes and eyes are a little much for me. Good job though.

 

Yea I used a regular #2 writing pencil, which looking back probably wasn't a good idea. It got dull fast and I didn't even think to sharpen it >.<

But thanks for that :3

 

No problem.

One post left til #400! (complete spam. Sorry!)

 

Yes, the legs seem a little short compared to the uper part or her body. The arms are a a little skinny too. But the face and the hands look insanely well drawn, the iPod and belly too xD

 

I really like it. its very good! it just makes me sad cuz i can't find my ipod ><

the porportions are fine, i think anyway. I think adding some colour will liven it up a bit =]

 

Yea, the hands were so time consuming. It took me ages to figure out the positioning for all the fingers. xD

I thought about coloring it but I was afraid it might ruin the picture. I hate when that happens ;_;