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  1. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    I walk a differenet path.
    I walk so fast.
    I see you there and go right past.
    You see me and you call my name.
    But where I'm going we don't play your game.
    So I walk.
    I see God so I stop and talk.
    I said "God, Why do I go where a go?"
    God opened a door and just said "Go."
    I step through and take a look around.
    I see a note book lying on the ground.
    But I'm gonna be late so I walk.
    I walk and I talk.
    I sing little rap.
    I wish I could erase the phrase "rap is crap."
    Suddenly around me flowers popped up.
    I felt like I was dead and I never woke up.
     
  2. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Not bad...although accidentally misspelled "different," "ground," and "last," you forgot to add an apostrophe to "don't". Otherwise, you did pretty good...is this your first poem you ever wrote?
     
  3. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    This is really random and hilarious. LOL.

    I love the "I sing a little rap. I wish I could erase the phrase "rap is crap""

    GX you rock.

     
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