I haven't done an artwork for a while now. Sorry! ^^; I was busy studying for SAT's and others like that. I was reading some "How to Draw Manga" books during the time when I didn't draw and learned some new things. Hope I actually did better. http://xephos49.deviantart.com/art/Waiting-129111098 And I'm not gonna purr in the traditional art area now because some people are offended somehow. CnC plz.
Not gonna lie, proportions aren't that great. The shoulders seem to come out from nowhere, and the chin isn't quite defined enough, if she were looking straight on there would be almost no chin. Face seems a little flat as well. The right foot looks longer than the other. Work more mainly on the arm and upper body.
I'll try and Cnc to my best effort. First on the face: Her face looks totally almost flat, like voldemort's does in the harry potter movies. But she's not voldemort, so her face should be human yes. Her face should not be as so long up and down. Her eye is unnaturally large and that type of eye does not work for profile. It should be more like >. Plump out her lips, she's female but has none. Profile for me at first was very hard, harder then hands, soon I got the hang of it. This tutorial should help. http://kage-ookami4.deviantart.com/art/Profile-The-Basics-Revisited-34865062 The hair is totally flat, too, especially the bangs. I don't joke, it looks like a mop on her head. The end of the hair is a bit sharp? it should flow, not look like a bunch of knives. The body for one at profile is quite good for your skill level. I suck at bodies at profile. XP But her head compaired to her body is tiiinnny. make sure you keep to proportions. Knees are a bit awkward, too. Her arms look really thick and her whole body is reaally husky. If that was your intention, good job. The shading is quite good for your skill level.
Thank you ^^ I kinda thought something was wrong when I drew it. xD Usually, I can't draw hair very good unless they are looking straight level. ^^ Thanks. I read some how to draw mangas to help me on that. I just need to compare the thickness of the arms now and how to make it better. I watch my friends shade pics with these strange pens and I found one a while back and thought of how to use it and practiced.
