Waiting

No need for a story for this one. It's obvious.

I've been waiting for you
Your parting words were
"I'll be back soon"
How long is soon?
It's been too long
I'm not good at waiting
My feet are tapping
My fingers are drumming
The longer I wait for you
The more faith I lose
It's getting harder
The days seem longer and less fun
I'm still waiting
I've come to realize
That's what girls do
We wait for our knights
We wait for our heroes
We wait for our loved ones
I've been waiting too long
Give me a sign that you're coming back
So that I don't have to cry
So that I can stop waiting

 

I liked it. It was very good, and I know how it is to wait.

 

very cool, dudet. 'love it as always. ^-^

 

That was fantastic! A job well done!

 

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*cries and claps*

WONDERFUL!
That was just wonderful

I couldn't say it better myself :D

 

thats really good, i like that you descibe what that person was doing while they wait, its awsome!

 

Awesome job! I loved it! great rhythm... great length altogether... although I'd say that the lines were a bit short... and the atmosphere of the poem was pretty sad... but a good poem alltogether... keep up the good work ^^