I REEAAAAALLLY like this one. Something about it makes me smile~ I'd like to hear(or read) anyone's CNC please! >.< Link Drawn for an art contest on gaia.
wow its really good. i loved the clothes. however i believe more detail shouldve been put into the face. who am i to talk though? My Sora looks like my Kairi! lol
I think the face is perfect as it is, could've used a bit of shading for the shirts, cos it looks kinda flat where it's unzipped. Apart from that, I love it (And I faved it ;))
Hmm . . . ok, It's a very good drawing hun, I like it, and I love the idea you are aiming for, Violence can be a Passion. It's sexy. 8D Now, the drawing in itself is good, but I'll not overlook the negatives. I'm not sure how detailed you were attempting to make this drawing, nor how much perfection you were aiming for, but I'll give you an honest and very detailed criticism of it [also because since you seem to be wanting it too]. The body proportion is really good, I must say, though it still could've been better, as I find something awkward about the torso. Also, you drew his pects with arcs, making it seem like he's got some nice moobs, so next time, when drawing the pects of a man, make the lines straight instead of an arc. Also considering that he's wearing a jacket, you shouldn't even be able to see his pects, and from the 3D point of view, his jacket should be straight as it falls from his pects until the hem. This also means, that there isn't any natural flow to his clothing. Adding some fold to his jacket might've been good. From his hip and down, it seems to be fine . . . though a male's figure is an upside down triangle, and you've given him a slight hourglass shape. It isn't that bad actually, but his hips sure don't lie here [still, this is nothing compared to Axel's hips xD]. His neck is really thick, and it makes his figure seem more awkward than it should be . . . his thick neck reminds me of the super muscular dudes, and his face is . . . rounded? O.o' Well, I actually cannot put my finger on it, but the face cutting is also awkward. The expression, well I can't tell what he's thinking. He seems sad, mad and little crazy all at the same time, unless that -was- the expression you were aiming for, but I'd still work on the face and expression. Remember, the EYES are what makes a drawing alluring. It's all in the eyes . . . once you put the expression in the eyes, the rest of the face will come naturally. The hand atop his head is okey, and it seems natural, but his other hand, ehh, not so much. You've somehow missed perspective on that hand, and it looks a little bent, as in broken. His holding of the chain is also weird, not to mention that his hand is way too small. Ah, you are missing the 3D perspective again when you drew him holding the chain and the dangling portion too. And putting in folds in the arms could've helped a lot, hun. Also, shade it too, it would've given the drawing another level of 3D perspective. However, when you do shade, don't use your finger, and don't smear. D8 That's a golden rule! Well, apart from everything, you still draw better animé characters than I can, and keep practicing, you'll master this soon enough!
