I think this is pleasing to the eye. EDIT: This has nothing to do with Verizon. Sorry to get your hopes up.
I like this. Lighting is good, and flow is nice. Blur the surrounding foreground though, that bfings the tag down a bit.
You've got a point. It's good but nothing biggy apart from the great lighting. The jumbled up mess on her at the bottom is messes up the beauty a bit though.