Unwelcome visitor

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Ratchet, Apr 8, 2007.

  1. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    When sat down at my computer one night
    A huge spider I saw in the glow of the light.
    Across my carpet it stalked imaginary prey,
    Where it had come from I just couldn't say.

    I leapt into action, container in hand
    Evicting the monster my grand master plan.
    On catching the spider, I hasten to add,
    Knowing I beat it made me quite glad.

    I carefully took it and released it outside
    With plenty of crevices and bushes to hide.
    My long legged visitor that gave me a fright
    Ran out of the container and into the night.





    Yes it really happened and the spider had a leg span of just over 1". I'm not scared of spiders though and I would never kill one.
     
  2. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    That was funny that was, hope you write more
     
  3. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    I will write more and I tend to write from experience and observation so expect random topics.
     
  4. Nice. And ok I will then. =P
     
  5. TheOtherKeyblade Destiny Islands Resident

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    That was actually really really cute. XD Random Topics eh? I <3 randomness.
     
  6. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    Thanks for your support. I love writing about random things.
     
  7. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    I hate spiders... ._.

    But I loved this. XD

    Of course... That spider woulda been dea by the end if it were me, but whatever. XD

    Gewd job. =3
     
  8. Darkvincent Gummi Ship Junkie

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    lol u got courage I would hav squashed it on site kol poem ^^
     
  9. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    I'm glad you liked it. I'll write and post more later.
     
  10. Rax Traverse Town Homebody

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    That was great. The words flowed perfectly.