Traditional Art umm...help?

I know this really sux. That was my very FIRST official time I ever drew females and I know its bad. (Guess I just suck at drawing) Nonetheless, some comments would be appreciated.

BTW, if you wana know why she's crying, don't ask....I have no idea either. :p :p

 

Are you SERIOUS!! You don't suck! You're really awesome!

 

Aww, it's so sweet but here are some tips:
1.You should have made her a little higher/longer that way she would not look so down sized.
2.Her arms should be more marked and the edges(like the elbow) should be marked where it is.
3.Her hips should be more outstanding so we can see her figure.

But other than that this is really good:)
And her face is very good drawed! Her expresion is really well made, I don't think this was bad :)
The shadowing is good to.

 

As I said, that was my first time drawing females...

And I will take the tips into consideration the next time I draw......probably never.

 

And that's why she's giving you tips, mastersword900.

It's not bad though. For one, it's neat and I also liked the shadowing.

 

I did not mean it in a bad way, the drawing is really nice for a first attempt
and it is like ロクサス said I was just giving you tips so your next one can maybe become a little better :)(I don't mean to offend you in anyway)

 

my tips, not that technically,
but draw as much as you can, and be happy
that's the reason why I kept drawing for nearly 10 years

 

:) :) :) :)

That is really really good!!!
It almost makes me cry...

 

Okay well, if you're never gonna draw again then I don't think I should bother giving you crits >_>

Otherwise! It's a pretty nice drawing, Naminé came out nicely. n_n

 

Not digging the tears, they look like...well this is a forum for all ages, so I won't say.

Tears aren't supposed to look that thick and consistent, they are more runny/watery.

 

Try making the tears look more watery and not like hail. >.< Namine doesn't cry out hail.
Lovely though. Everything else is lovely, better then me. I love the shading, but you might want to try drawing the hair a little different, Namine's hair isn't like that.

 

What are you talking about? >_>

You're really good.

 

tears look like hail, hmm never thought about that lol. :D :D :p

 

I really liked the shading. It looks really good. Um, all my tips have already been said above. ^_^ good luck in your next piece.

 

Uh yeah you dont suck at all.....I like the shading but I think there was too much tears.
Lol you can tell you scaned it because of the backround.

 

yeah I did ^_^ Apparently my scanner was bigger than my paper. (that or I positioned it badly)