Main theme here; Great concept bad composition. For the first, lighting is shown but not reiterated, so it's kinda' unproportional. Try to show some dodge/burn techniques to show shadow and such. Interesting concept though...I just might base something off of it. Once again, bad compo. First off, border scratchhhh. Don't do borders anymore bro kinda' wears it down. I really like the feel and style here. But it's not put correctly. On the bottom right, the clear parts where the red is...it feels like you just took a big circle brush and erased it. Your pentooling dissolve technique is exclusive here, I don't see anyone else using this thing. You have a thing going on that. I really like those. But this one seems like it's one of your betters. As much as it's missing and feels a bit mediocore, it seems like you were trying to get that look. It's actually wearable material for me bro. Great work.
First one I'm not really getting. The stock looks very 2-D, and there's really not much too it. It looks like you took a stock and added some smudge stick filter to it. :/ But I like the whole border thing. Second is eh... It looks very messy, and the left and right sides don't seem to match in terms of style. It looks like those two orange dots are goat's eyes, too, which is freaking me out. And I agree with Split -- It seriously looks like you just took a circle brush and erased. Not the best thing you've come up with, IMO.
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f199/Cin999/Random Crap/girlperson.jpg http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f199/Cin999/Random Crap/azngirl.jpg Those are the two original stocks that I worked with, just so you guys can actually see what I did. And I agree with all the cnc provided so far. I knew you guys would either love them or hate them. XD
