I can't see them, they don't load on my page, is it possible to upload it and give us a link- it's probably my slow computer XD
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l112/rikurep/art/nok_by_rikurep.jpg http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l112/rikurep/art/unknown_by_rikurep.jpg here, i hope those work
Wow. Props. I'm not such a awesome drawer, but from a public sort of view, I'd say the style is unique. If you made your own game or story, your characters would be original, I think so.
*RED EYES FIRE LASERS AT LINED PAPER* Apart from the atrocious lined paper, these are not bad. (; In the first one, the guy's right shoulder looks marginally smaller than the left. The arms as well are short (arm = shoulder to elbow), you should make them the same length as the forearm. For the second one, I'd say the main problem is the wrinkles needs to be worked on. Left eye's kinda weird too - it's a whole lot more thinner than the right. Again, not bad~