I gotta find a stride I am way out of it I think, I know its missing something, or alot of things. Suggestions plz
Effects need more flow. Try getting rid of some of that 1 px pencil lines. Preferrably the right side and middle lines. Try to make more of a \/ flow with this. Or move the stock over to the left and make the flow a / instead. As for color, could definitely use some more. Add more blues/purples (light ones) to the effects you add and to the background. And try some oranges as well as creams. :3
