Try to see the bright side

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You may try to cry
You may try to die
But that never will do nothing
Just try to get up

You think that everything is dark
That everything is born to die
That everything will try to hurt your heart
That is wrong, you will have to trust in someone

Yes, is very hard to be alive
But there is a bright side
You may try to kill yourself
Don´t think in negative

All that we do isn´t full of pain
Hapiness are only little moments
You may see them worthless
But what about love?

You said love is meaningless
That will not fill your hollowness
You don´t know about that
So don´t act like you can critisize

You think everything is suffering
Try to save yourself now
If you can´t do that task
Then it will end in meaningless suffer and cry

Just try to see the bright side
You may like it, who knows?
You think everything is about dying
You can´t say that you want to be sad, first try cherring up

Try to cheer up
Is the best thing to do now
If you life in depression
It will end killing you

Don´t feel like you were nothing
You may think in that, that you are not a living being
But you can´t escape from reality
There is more to see than with your eyes, so see with your heart...
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Hope my happy poems aren´t monotone ._..

 

Good length....good free verse.....happy atmosphere with a good message behind it....good poem man....keep it up.....

 

Thanks ^^ :3.

 

No, it's definitely isn't monotone! This is awesome! I love these new style of poems Chaser...totally! :) :glomp:

 

Thanks :) :glomp:

 

well... it didn't quite cheer me up but it was an awesome poem! keep up the good work!

 

Thank you ^^, and sorry it didn´t cheered you up, I feel useless ._..

 

*hugs* don't feel useless! :P

 

Okay, I´ll try.

 

Well it's great to see more and more happy poems.

This is really great. I'm usually really happy and hyper, but next time I feel depressed I'll bookmark this and come back to it.

And it's also really cool that you tried to help cheer someone up by writing it.

Great job.
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Thank you ^^.