treasure planet: a new map

PROLOGUE
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A small girl of three,sat in her bed,listening to her book telling her a story of a pirate and treasure planet,she watached the ships move around with such intrest,and just as it got to the good part,her father came in,

"jamie-lee sarah hawkins..."he said walking to her,he was a tall,brown haired,blue eyed man,with a kind face,"i thought i told you to go to bed a hour ago...."he said sitting on his daughters bed

"Oh but dad...its just getting good!"she said smiling


"oh no! not the face...dont give me that face..."he said laughing "oh alright then...you can read it...but im sitting here..."

"jim..."said another voice"you need to tell her off sometimes..."


"oh but mom...its only a story...and look at her eyes..."jim said, his mother looked at jamie-lee,who was using her puppy dog eyes,

"Oh can those eyes get any bigger....just like her father...."she smiled "Ok you two...read it...but then get to bed jamie-lee..."she walked away again

"hehe works eveytime..."jamie-lee said laughing and opening the book again,she watched it again,after alittle while,she fell asleep leanning against her father, he smiled and picked her up gently and put her under the covers and tucked her in,he walked out the room closing the door,

"your doing a really good job...you know that...right jim?"his mother said

"sometimes its hard...y'know.....helping out at the inn and looking after her...." he said"sometimes i feel like its my fault that her mother left..."

"Now you listen to me james hawkins...its not your fault...that her mother left and im telling you...your a great...father...." she smiled,

"thanks mom...." he said,he opend the door again and looked back in at his daughter,smiling, then he closed it agian
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chapter one- in trouble...again...

~TWELVE YEARS LATER.~

a girl with long brown hair lay in her bed,fast asleep,until the sun touched her face,she opend her blue eyes slowly,looking around the room,she jumped out of bed,and rumaged through her drawers for her clothes,once she found then and had them on she stood in front of the mirror,she wore a white top,with black hood,blue jeans and black shoes,around her neck was a neckless with a picture of her and her father in it,she looked at the corner of her room,and saw her solar surfer sitting against the wall,she grabbed it and flung open her door and almost dropped her solar surffer,her father stood in front of her,arms crossed

"going somewhere?"he said with a smile

"uh....yeah...im was just gonna-" she started

"you know you'r meant to help out at the inn today..."he said

"I know...i was gonna come back..."she said

"jamie..."he said

"dad...please...i wont be long..."she said smiling

"fine"jim sighed

"thanks!" she ran off,the next thing she knew was that,she was flying through metal works,then she herd a noise, she looked behind and saw the cops

"not again...."she mutterd,

the door of the inn opend and she stood in between the two cops

"jamie!"jim said angrily

"thanks for the lift guys"she said shrugging them off

"not so fast...mr hawkins....we need to talk in private..."one of the cops said

"Ok..."jim said opening a door..."Im here..." once they were all seated they began to talk,tell jim that jamie was tresspassing

"One more offence from her and she'll be put in juvinal hall...."

"I under stand thank you..."jim said leading them out he turn to her "again?! do you want to go to juvinal hall?!" he said once they were gone...

"No..."

"then why do you do it?!"

"I dont know.."she said

"thats not good enough!"

"forget this!" she said running out the room and outside.slamming the door behind her, she climb on the roof and hugged her knees

 

interesting idea of taking a disney world and creating another story about it, i'm really interested in seeing how this progresses.