Tragic Love Story

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  1. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    Tragic love story






    Thunder clouds loomed overhead a great big field of grass, two figures stand alone across from each other without movement. The only sound heard in the field was the wind picking up and a dress ruffling in the wind. The girl approached the man with a white rose in her hands, her mouth moved to form words, but none came out.

    She touched her lips in shock and looked pleading at the man, but the man looked angered and pulled out a gun. She moved away to try to run, but the bullet left the chamber and directed towards her heart. She gasped and dropped the white rose, which was now full of red blood, as she fell down, time slowed down and she closed her eyes.

    “I love you…so much…” she said to him, even though he cannot hear her over the now pouring rain.

    She thought in her mind of what she would say when she would die, and now she finally said them.

    “Since I am free…Let me tell you of our Tragic Love Story…”



    I totally forgot about this story. This bit is from a story idea I had before Alice in Murderland...like a year before AIM was thought of, but I was scared to put it and didnt have enough time to write more then this.

    So it's up to you guys
     
  2. Spunk Ransom you're already perfect

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    Oh wow. This is awesome.
    I would really love seeing the whole story,
    and finding out the lover's story.
    Please post the whole thing! (:
     
  3. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    Okay then, but then I would write out a whole story would be hard, since I have A-I-M in progress. But I do seem more Interested in this one then A-I-M


    But this story would be told in both perspectives, the Boys and the Girls
     
  4. Spunk Ransom you're already perfect

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    I think that would be awesome, although, take your time working on it, but I really do think this will be quite the interesting story.
     
  5. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    I Am..I am thinking of updating every two weeks or month for this one XD gives me enougth time for this
     
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    Agreed, I like how it has started off. Keep it up =]
     
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    Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmm...

    I'm speechless..
    that was like.. a total bitch slap..
    lol... idk on what to say.. GIVE ME MORE!
    D<
     
  8. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    So I shall post the first chapter thursday!