I'd knew i'd always find you. We cried in each other's arms when we saw each other. We could be homeless, but still love each other. We could be broken. We protect each other, we watch each other's back in situations. We start a new day, with different objectives, and different situations. We'll always be together. We get married. We start a new life together. We stay together until we die. We die together. We are together forever.
I actually really like this. Tis simple, but sometimes simplicity is the key to the soul. The only thing I would say is try to reuse words in a wise manner, and break it into stanzas or whatnot. That way, it flows more beautifully. Good work sir!
I actually felt confused when i saw this in the spam zone but now that misty moved it i now understand it's actually pretty good.
I agree with Llave, it is very good in its easy to read way. I also agree perhaps if you were to break it up here and there and put it in a form that seems more like a poem and less like a paragraph it would make it easier for the reader to feel what it is you're trying to say. All in all it was a nice poem, you should write more.
