I wrote this poem in fifteen seconds. It seems wasteful but for that fifteen seconds I went through my mind, looked at my memories, and it felt like eternity. All I needed was that fifteen seconds to feel at peace. Note: CnC is appreciated, but I really did write this is 15 seconds during a day at school. I modified a couple words from the original because the "at peace" part was originally "cry inside". It was during a day I felt sad, but every-time I look at this poem I feel like it should say "as peace"
Interesting, never seen anyone go for the time length . . . It's actually an intriguing idea. Aside from that, it was short and sweet. You got your point across, and even added a deeper part at the end. Good poem ^.^
