I was really bored, and I hated how the story ended. So my brain made this, and I'm fairly proud of it. :3 This is a FanFic of the Twilight Series, by Stephenie Meyer. A Jacob&Bella story! But really, I'd say it was me, and not Bella! lol xD _____________________________________ It’s 1:02am, and the clock keeps ticking. I waiting longer, lingering in my silence, I’ve been up all day, and all night. I smirked knowing this was effortless. But he wouldn't lie to me, I know he wouldn’t. Embracing my torso, warningly, a warm touch pulled in away, and I was breathing loudly into a pare chest. My heart race picked up, but I knew why. I grinned, knowing what I’ve been waiting for all night was finally here, and I was placed right where I wanted to be, right in his warm muscular arms. “Your late!†I whispered loudly He chuckled, knowing this wound happen. “ I know, I know. Did I keep you?†I gave him a dirty look. “All night, did I keep you?†I said in a mocking tone. I was playing him game, and he knew I would lose, I’d soon give in with a deep sigh. “Actually,†He began sarcastically, “ You did, I was playing tag with Embry and Quil. Another ‘boys night out’ I should say.†He grinned with joy, remembering the rough night. “Ugh!†I groaned He chuckled that deep throat chuckle, that always made me smile. His grin widen, and I held back my heavy sigh I was not giving in that easily tonight. “Yeah? Did you trip and run home? With a scraped knee, running home to daddy to take care of it?†He jumped, and I knew I hit a weak spot. “Ouch, that’s a killer.†He puffed out his lower lip, and bulged his eye, making a puppy dog face, he knew I would soon give into. “Na-huh!†Knowing the sigh of defeat would come any moment. He looked down, making a sound which made me want to take his face into my hands and take him right there. But he made it look like he was crying, for my defeat. I sighed and sighed heavily. I gave in, and the war was over. “ You know me to well Jacob Black!†“I do, don’t I?†I nodded with agreement. And yawned, rubbing my eye lips, away of it’s weariness. He touched the side of my cheekbone, making me look straight into his gaze. His dark brown eyes, melting me into a puddle around his body. I threw my arms tightly over his shoulder’s and around his neck. Stretching my neck out to touch his lips with mine. He leaned forward, crushing his lips harder into mine. But this was relief, I felt , not tension and fear. But relief of being home, where he belonged, with me. He pulled back, and I took in a deep breath . He laughed, and made that crocked smile of mine. “humph! I snarled back, but gave in to a smile and began laughing with him. “ Your brainless sometimes, ya’ know?†“ And, what of it?†I smacked him with a counter attack. He said nothing for a moment, the room was so quiet, just to quiet, before I said anything else, he stared at me, and began. “ Nothing, it just makes you, more cuter.†Cuter? I never heard that one before. “What do you mean? That’s I’m just to forgetful?†I made a face. Like that one face you’d make when your about to go, “ Oh no you didn’t!†His left eyebrow lifted, and he grinned. “ Yup, that’s what I mean!†I shrugged, and I couldn’t argue. I rolled my eyes, finding the ceiling, and then back to his face. And I grinned also. “ That’s the one thing I’m good at, and you know that!†“Better then you do, and you know it! He winked at me, and I felt the blood rush to my face, and he chuckled again. And I went more red, redder then a sunburn, when you’ve fallen asleep at the beach and forgot to put suntan lotion on. “Not funny!†I whined And he laughed some more, it was uncountable now. “Awe!†And I saw that the tear were coming, his face also went red. I began to giggle, but soon found myself laughing with him. He took my hand, and I felt my fingers threw his. The heat from his hand made my hand sweat, but before I could look him in the eye, he grabbed hold of my hair, and crush his lips to mine again. With my free hair, I ran my fingers threw his shaggy hair. Pulling him closer, letting go of everything, and he himself inside. I felt dizzy, forgetting to breath again. The smell of his breath ran threw my nostrils, and threw me, and I melted again. He let go, and I gasped for air, I felt the blood rushing to my face again. But he didn’t laugh like last time. The room began to spin, and I feel back on the bed, and glanced up and the ceiling. “Bella, you still alive?†He said in a mocking manner again. “Nope.†I grinned at my joke, and he began to chuckle again. “I love it when you laugh, Jake. Make’s me all warm inside.†The corner’s of his mouth began to twitch a smile. And I grinned, knowing he would soon give in. “And the smell of you knocks the breath out of me.†He resisted again. “The taste of you mak-†He cut me off, with another heart pounding smooch. Before I even held my breath he pulled away, and took me into his arms again. His face in my hair, and I felt him take a deep breath. His heart beating evenly. He began to rock me back and forth. My fingers threw his. And the weariness filled my heavy sleepless eyes. And I feel into a deep sleep in his arms. ***
There's alot of grammatic errors, but that is easily corrected. On a personal note, I don't like the font or the center aligement. I'm a traditionalist when it comes to stories i'm afraid. On the plus side, you really describe each character well, and you include those little details that most writers overlook, I like that.
>.< Grammar errors, I have problem's with that. But I apologize for that, I didn't like the format the stupid thing was giving, me. :/ Anyways, I wanted to get a feeling in the story. Making it like, 'you where there' things. But I do see what your talking about.
