This is a story I've thought of in my head and is a prolog of what will happen tell me what you think of it but let me make the story. And don't complain or tell me of my bad typing and spelling. It is three generations since the end of organization 13. Keyblades are now common amongst the people of the worlds. On a world called Sether Plains the Organization was resurrected by some unknown agent. They now call themselves Organization 11. This is because they are trying to get 2 more members for them to get 65 total. They are split into 5 groups of 13. Group 1 being the most formidable group being the original 13. Malificent Is still at rise and is partners with a resurrected Jaffar. They cause terror far greater than 3 generations ago. But this terror is nothing compared to the organization 65. Each having there own nobodies none have been defeated yet. The wage war against the Heartless but more often wage war with the Keyblade Empire. Many people go to Keyblade Academies to learn all about the keyblade. Everyone musty pass the keyblade academy to be able to wield there own keyblade and a ceremony is made to those who pass as they pull out the Keyblade in the stone to determine what there keyblade will be. They learn how to do magic and combos plus a new ability that turns them into different elements. Level 4s are the beginners of keyblade wielders. they only use one keyblade and can’t use magic, sleights, or transformations. But they can use beams. Level 3 get a second keyblade, but still can't use magic, sleights or transformations. Finally when turned into a level 2 Keyblade wielders choose between Physical' mental, or transformation to determine what happens next. If chosen a physical a keyblade wielder will have a keyblade hover off the hand as if controlling it with his mind. If he advances more he will be a level 1 and will control both. If chosen a mental he will get a third keyblade that can attach to his other keyblades and if a level one a 4th keyblade that also attaches. If chosen a transformation, The user will lose his key blades for a giant keyblade. If a level one the keyblade wielder will Get a second giant keyblade. Along with becoming a level 2 physicals can learn sleights while mentals can learn magic and transformers can learn transformations and transformation sleights. If one becomes a level pone the wielder can choose to learn the other choices as well. END OF PROLOG
must....resist.....typos....not....resisting....well....too....many....typos............ very good, very elaborate, this is your story not mine, so im not going to say u should change anything....
What typos? Nah just kidden I edited it but its dark in the comp room so I have a reason for so many.
CHAPTER 1 "Come on Leo! You can't be that bad!" But he was. Leo was in a foul mood since he failed the test earlier that day that he studied so hard for. "I'm not its just why do we need to do this again?" "Because we need to learn how to cast magic in case somebody were to attack us from a ranged distance," retorted Toby. "Exactly correct Toby! "Yeah good job Toby†sarcastically said Leo. “Come on Leo its not that hard†said Maddie. “Yeah well I don’t need magic,†retorted Leo “I’m gonna be a physical master!†“Yeah unless you don’t pass the test at the end of school†said Mark. Leo could never understand Mark. He was always against him. He and his buddies Tango and Guy always agreed with him as if he were some Godfather character of some sort. “Yeah well nobodies gonna pass if you don’t start working.†Said coach Jark. “Psst, hey Leo†Leo saw that it was his buddy ,Chip “Yeah what?†“Just think of something fiery, the fieriest thing you can think of. That’ll work†He did. He thought of being grilled in a pit of fire in the hottest desert on the hottest day of the year. “FIRE!†he yelled. It had worked. The target dummy in front of him was incinerated. “Good work Leo looks like you finally got it†Just then an explosion was heard across the classroom. Mark had launched a fire spell which many had never seen. A Dragon of fire came out of the practice blade he had and disintegrated the dummy. A roar of clapping and yells filled the room. “Well done Mark, but next time work on the spell you are given not a higher advanced one!†Then the bell rang and everybody left before Coach Jark could say another word. That lunch Leo sat next to Chip. “So how did you know about that fiery thing in magic class today?†“My dad told me before school today,†“Oh†Leo said. He never met his dad. Nor his Mom. They had both died before he could even remember them. He was worried about the final exam today. “What do you think is on the final exam today?†he asked. “Beats me†said chip, “We don’t even know if its written or if we have to do something†“True†said Maddie who came up and sat next to them “Then again your not supposed to know its different for each year,†“Yeah and what are you doing here?†Chip said. “Well they say that they are putting us in groups of three when we pass so I’m gonna get to learn about everyone just in case,†she pause, “Hope its not you to I’m paired up with though†and she walked away. At the end of the school day they were suposed to meet in the main Hallway. Everyone showed up even parents. Leo felt lonely. He found Chip and his family and went to meet them. He sat by them and Waited for HeadKey Master Josu to start talking. The room went silent and everybody listened for him to start talking. “Listen up everyone, this is the test this year. You will come up to the Keyblade in the stone and pull on it. If you successfully pul out its mirror image it will transform into your future keyblade and you will have passed. If you can’t pull out its mirror image then you will have to attend another year of going to school.†There was silence all around the room. “We will call everyone up in alphabetical order. He started going down the list. He reached Chip and he went up. He grasped the keyblade in the stone and pulled out its mirror image then it transformed in to a dark blue key blade with jagged ends that were also curved. It was his turn next and he went up as his name was called. He grabbed the keyblade abd pulled. He pulled and pulled with all his might. Then an eruption was heard. It roared across the room he pulled out the mirror image and it transformed. It was unlike anykeyblade he had seen. It was pointed in the tip and had curved ends which met at each other. Then it had three points stinking out in the front. It was Black and white and it looked like it was lit up. He had done it. He passed. END OF CHAPTER 1
wat if somebody attacks from short range????hmmm???? hmmm???? hought u didnt think of that, did u? did u? ha!!! so there!!!!
