This was the last time Anyone talked to Naminé Strife

Hello all!
Well, I've just spent all day writing a Kingdom Hearts one-shot, I would post it here seperatly but it's about 4000 words.

So here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5335640/1/

Constructive Criticism is welcome, im always looking for ways to improve.

And if someone wants me to post it on here, then I will try... somehow :x

Thank you! :glomp: