Digital Art This style is now whored.

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Valium, Dec 30, 2008.

  1. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    It was a request so thats my excuse xD.
    Lightings a bit off and theres to much negative space.
    APART from that please CnC my ass.


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  2. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    Oh Mi Gosheroonies. I like it. (: She's really put out there. The left is a little lacking, but that's all I can really see that's wrong. (:
     
  3. Virtuoso Gummi Ship Junkie

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    You have officially WHORED this style. XD

    Yeah, the lighting is off, gotta work on that. There is also a lot of negative space, which could be easily filled in with effects that enhance the flow and composition in this tag.

    Overall, it's pretty hawt.
     
  4. Bareri-San 私はポテトだ。

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    wow, this is hot XD
    the white space on the left is bothering me a bit though. maybe you could do some effects in that area?
     
  5. Beauxxx Destiny Islands Resident

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    cute.
    but needs a light source. needs some colors to mix in, I'd suggest pastels.
    some of its overly sharpened. the 't' on the 'bust' is hindered by the effect behind it or on top of it.

    the typography's decent, but try something smoother.
    The tag in general could lose the border.

    The style's simplistic, but for your next style -
    expand your effects beyond just using tooling, stroking, and custom shapes.
     
  6. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    I like the effects used, but it has too much white. It needs more color. Also, the microscopic text you have in it is unneeded. No one is going to read it, so no one needs to see it. Other than that, the stock looks fine. 7.5/10
     
  7. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    That microscopic text is not there to be read
    just seen.