I suck at those. Anyway, I havent written poems/songs in ages, and lets take this as a...comeback song. Rather deep and dark, about broken hearts and love and stuff. NB: Not related to any past experiences, just so you know =) It's that moment when You see him The one you once gave your heart to And you remember How he took it, abused it, shattered it and gave it back to you Worn and torn and slipping through your fingers It takes 2 years to mend a heart together But a lifetime to forget what you did As the stitches are coming apart again You see him again And you start again Waiting for rejection again Its that moment when He asks if your alright You try to catch your breath again and say, yeah (yeah) You keep talking, its uneasy, but you're healing a shredded heart Worn and torn and slipping through your fingers It takes 2 years to mend a heart together But a lifetime to forget what you did As the stitches are coming apart again You see him again And you start again Waiting for rejection again Now can you see? What you did to me? Its awkward now its uneasy We don't talk anymore but its my....fault It takes 2 years to mend a heart together But a lifetime to forget what you did As the stitches are coming apart again You see him again And you start again Waiting for, Waiting for It takes 2 years to mend a heart together But a lifetime to forget what you did As the stitches are coming apart again You see him again And you start again Waiting for rejecion again Waiting for rejection again Waiting for rejection again Waiting for..... heheh i'm a little rusty at these things =) cnc?
Shattered and Hollow...wow that's deep. I like it! Might like to see wht other people come up with too. DON'T FORGET TO CNC IF U WANT PEOPLE!!! XD
Worn and torn; an unfinished past; unending rejection; painful memories; the new me; waiting; unforgotten Just putting these out there, I know much of them aren't so good but maybe they can give you some ideas ;D. Also you made a typo in the last stanza, the 6th phrase rejection n.n
