Yes, crappy title is crappy. v1 v2 v3 They're not finished, I am adding more to them because even I think that there's not enough going on. CnC and suggestions on what else I could put in plz, also... NO COMMENTS Oh yeah also, I didn't use any brushes B|
My best pick would be the second but the skin and tone seems to be too dark. Try to lighten the color since I see that group (I forgot XD) with bright skin and in bright colors. I think it would be better if you lighten it and I think that is all.
Um, just adding this in, but 'CnC' means Comments and Criticism. So you're kind of contradicting yourself by saying that. Anyway, if I had to pick one it'd be V2, but none of them are very appealing in my opinion. The render is indeed cute, but it's uninteresting because of where and how you've placed it. Try rotating it a bit, and making the effects flow with the rotation, because right now you've got like 3 different flows going on. The text doesn't really suit a banner. Take a look at ours; the text is in a simple, solid font, with details to make it look better. Trade your dotted, blocky text for one similar to ours. Work on how you arranged the text, too, because right now it looks like you typed "S-A-S-S-Y-'-S-[ENTER]-G-F-X-[ENTER]-S-H-O-P". Make it more interesting by having the words overlap, or use only lowercase on some of the words with uppercase on some other things. Or add some small text. Anything. It's a WIP, so take what I said into consideration.
v1 v2 needs the shine in v1 since that's about how much ull be able to work with right now with the style u are going for which sis quite simple & v3 has the stock too monotone k bye
i think the second one is the best it has better color, the third is almost too faded, and btw thats Hatsune Miku from vocaloid
