I'm liking this one. The stock is very nice first of all for a tag. The c4d fx are going good, especially on the right. The left fx are a bit too sharp. Nice depth, looks great. Text for some reason looks so good. Maybe because of the hues you used on the fx. You can dodge/burn around the edges of the fx to give it a bit more depth, especially the ones right beside the person. It shows it's kinda' going behind him, na' mean? Anyways. GJ. KIU.