Thinking of You

*September 2006*

Thoes eyes
Those lips
That voice
It's the one I'm gonna miss
You were my friend
But there is some thing you didn't know
I thought of you as more

Chorus
You were the picture in my story book
Your eyes were the stars in my sky
And I thought we'd be together forever
But now is the time to part our ways

My thoughts
I can't speak
As the tears roll down my cheeks
I don't want to leave
Not now
Tell me what I'll do without you

Chorus

So try not to be sad
Please don't cry
I can tell you one thing and that is why
Why I love you
It's your eyes
It's your voice
It's the way you held me and told me good-bye

 

Good length.....good free verse.....pretty good atmosphere.....once again I like how it is a song/poem.....keep up the good work.....

 

Ooh, very nice...although you accidentally misspelled 'tell' in the last chorus, but anyhow...great job, keep them coming! :) They're awesome! XD

 

I like it i'm giving it 4 stars

 

Wow that was really great!

 

Very good, but yeah, get rid of the grammar error, but very good ^^.

 

Thanks everyone! ^.^ I fixed it.