Digital Art Thingamajig

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Valium, Jul 10, 2012.

  1. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I have officially stopped trying...... :(
     
  2. Korosu Kingdom Keeper

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    No! Don't stop! You make such pretty//beautiful things!

    Anyway, I kinda..dislike how dark this is? But that may just be my personal opinion. The opacity in gradient textures just bother's me. [If you did use gradient textures //Kelly is a derp]

    I like the placement and such on. Jealous of your pieces.
     
  3. ArosFarron Destiny Islands Resident

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    I personally like the piece even though I have to agree with Korosu about the darkness of the image. It is dark but all and all I like the image. Keep it up.
     
  4. Makaze Some kind of mercenary

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    Great work on all but two things.

    Because you have one very bright spot and a ton of dark space, the tag looks mostly empty. You should add some content to the left side.

    The text is a little too sharp. You should lower its opacity slightly and let it blend with the background a bit. It stands out even more than Sora does.

    You have good grasp of what colors go well together and render blending, so don't worry about changing that too much.
     
  5. Saxima [screams geometrically]

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    This is a great start for something wonderful, and by your previous works, I can tell that you do wonderful stuff. I wouldn't give up on this one just yet, I'm sure you can do something more with it.

    At a first glance, I can see what you're trying to represent - Sora is light in darkness, yep. Unfortunately, I think there may be too much darkness in this one, as the left side of it looks almost completely empty, save a few texture spots, which by the way look nice. I'd say that maybe you might consider moving Sora to the left a little, just a bit - don't put him in the center, but off-center-right, that might do some good, and then after, use some complementing lighter colors to spread around Sora, give the light just a little of a farther reach.

    I'd also take a look at not having it so sharp as well, it seems to have a hard effect on the eyes (and mine being especially sensitive, I mostly say this for myself), and maybe darken the overall image just a little.

    It's a good start, maybe with some of those tips, you'll gain a bit of inspiration with this piece; good luck!