I like the pants on the first one, the hair and the shirt on the second one. Not bad, but I still think you should add color to your pictures. Sketches are good, but I think you should fix them up and make them masterpieces.
Nice clothes effects! ^^ I like it how you make them seem realistic. Nice job! Try coloring them just like Sho suggested. :3
I dislike having to reiterate this. I thought it'd be an understandable feeling but apparently I was gravely mistaken. I do not like or have ability in coloring. It would change into a garish nightmare of primary colors and undefined lines. Not unlike a work a kindergarten student could accomplish in several seconds. Stop asking me to color. I'll do it if I feel it's appropriate. If not, I expect you to respect the fact that I'd rather not ruin something I might happen to like.
I love both of their hair! OwO I agree, love how ya 'colored' the clothes of the second one. I like their poses as well :3 Can I have a real life version of the first one's outfit? xD Love it~ <3
Much appreciated and duly noted. It's pretty standard stuff isn't it? Well I know a bunch of people who dress like that. If you understood my rationale and plot line that I have behind everything I draw you'd pretty much understand why that is but that would be a bit pointless, no?