The world.

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Shuhbooty, Jul 28, 2008.

  1. Shuhbooty moon child

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    When I look up and the sky
    I see the real world
    Not Blue with puff white clouds.
    I see green with gray clouds

    When were driving
    I see the real world
    The black smoke pumping out our cars
    Like the coals we burn on winter days.

    During the day
    I see the real world
    As we walk down the street,
    All the flashing lights
    From the tall houses, from the restaurants, and from our coolers

    At night
    I see the real world
    The only beautiful thing left in this world
    Are the stars, that shine bright.
    Untouched by human hands.

    When I look at you mommy
    For my good night kiss,
    I see the real world flash before your eyes too,
    With all the bills you pay,
    To keep our house, our water, our car

    You care for your family,
    And we care for you too,
    But if we don’t do anything now
    The world you promised me, won’t be the same anymore.​

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    I got this idea off a commercial. D:
     
  2. Tora-chan Traverse Town Homebody

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    Well even though it's off a commercial, it's still pretty good :)
     
  3. jettie Twilight Town Denizen

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    but you can't see the stars in the city thanks to the lights.
     
  4. Shuhbooty moon child

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    Heh, yeah.
    I now the words don't flow and all. But I think it's an okay poem.