The Void.

I stand alone.
Left by those I knew.
Tortured by those I didnt.
I look back to my life.
And I think.
Am I a void, or a mistake?

I reach to where my heart was.
Yet I find a black void of pain.
I remember my family.
And how to them I am now a forgotten voice.
A lost mistake.

I stand alone.
Surrounded by the dark.
Devoured by my emotions.
I look forward in my life.
Yet all I see.
Is a black void.

 

very good. i have to let it sink in before i rate it.

 

I tink this is neither one of my best nor one of my worst.

 

id say... 7-8/10 pretty good.

 

This poem shows emotion very well. And has nice rhythm too. Well done, but not the best.

 

i agree. but now, im am going to be stalking you here for any new poems :D

 

Meh poems were best when I first started psting them...

And its very rare I post poetry here anymore..

 

Well, we'll have to fix that.

I dont think that was the best Ive heard, not a fantastic rytheme to it.

7/10