Here's chapter 7! Wow, 2 chapters without a day in between! :D Things are REALLY heating up!!! Marluxia is greatly needed...but can he help? WILL he help? Only fate will tell... ~Chapter 7~ ~~~Wednesday Night~~~ Vexen suddenly got up and lunged at Zexion. He tackled him and pinned him to the floor. “We’ll go together, Zexion…” he said. He was about to bite his neck when one of Axel’s Chakrams struck Vexen and knocked him off. Axel ran over to Zexion and pulled him up off the ground, and they began to run down the hall. “Where are we running?” Zexion shouted, still running. “To Marluxia’s room.” Axel answered back. They ran to Marluxia’s door, yanked it open, and ran inside. Once inside they locked the door. Marluxia got up from his desk and looked at them strangely. “What are you—“ “We’ve got a problem!” Axel said, cutting Marluxia off. “The Vampire Nobody is your sister!” Zexion said. Marluxia looked at him as if he were crazy. “What’s wrong with you?” He said. “And how did you find out about her?” Axel shook his head. “It doesn’t matter. Vexen told us. He must have heard it from Roxas or someone." Marluxia crossed his arms. “I don’t find you joking about my sister funny.” He said. Zexion looked exasperated. “We’re telling the truth! The Vampire Nobody IS your sister!” he said. “She must have come because you miss her.” Axel said. Marluxia shook his head. “Impossible. She…” Marluxia sighed. “…Died.” He said, forcing himself to say it. “Well, she’s back, and she plans to kill us, and probably kill you too!” Axel said. Zexion looked at Marluxia. “You’ve got to call her off.” He said. “How do I do that?” Marluxia asked. “You have to stop missing her! You have to stop wanting to see her.” Axel said. “I’ll NEVER do that!” Marluxia yelled. Zexion walked over to him “Calm down! Maybe if tried forgiving yourself for wanting to see her…” Marluxia pushed Zexion away. “I don’t regret wanting to see her! I have nothing to feel sorry for, except for letting her die.” Marluxia yelled. He walked toward the door, but before opening it, he turned to face Axel and Zexion. “Maybe she was meant to be here. Maybe this was all meant to happen. Fate works like that.” “Marluxia! Are you even listening to yourself?” Zexion yelled. “You are letting your friends down! They are getting HURT!!! Don’t you care?” Marluxia turned so that his back was towards them. “Don’t you?” He asked. He opened the door. “I won’t give her up for my friends. Blood is thicker than water.” Axel sighed angrily. “We’re NOBODIES! We are neither blood nor water!!” Marluxia laughed. “Then why should it matter?” He walked out of the door. Zexion sighed. “We’ll have to kill her. It’s the only way to save the others.” He said. Axel looked up at Zexion. “I understand what Marluxia is feeling. I know what it’s like to lose someone close.” Zexion looked at Axel. Axel looked back at him. He smiled. “But I’d never let a memory lose out to you guys.” “Never?” Zexion asked. “Never.” Just then, the ground shook. “It is time!!!” A voice boomed. Axel and Zexion ran outside—where the voice sounded like it was coming from. A girl appeared in front of them. She reminded them of Marluxia. “Who are you?” Axel demanded. She laughed. Strangely, yet sweetly. “My name is Rose. Perhaps you know my brother.” “Marluxia?” Zexion asked. “Yes.” She replied. Axel summoned his Chakrams. Zexion tried to summon his book, but couldn’t. “Looking for this?” she asked, summoning his book. Zexion’s eyes got wide. “Give that back!” He shouted, running towards her. Holding the book in one hand, she lifted her other one and pointed at Zexion. “Rose storm!” she shouted, and a huge gale of rose petals and thorns came towards him. “Deflect!” Zexion shouted. “Reverse deflect!” she shouted. The gale rushed towards Zexion and knocked him back 5 yards. He stood up. He had no idea she knew that spell. “Rose binds, briar thorns of size, hold fast, and paralyze!” Rose shouted. A dense group of thorny vines wrapped tightly around Axel and Zexion. Axel tried burning them away with blasts of fire, but the vines wouldn’t budge. She laughed again as she walked up towards the two. “This is where it all ends.” She said, “It’s time to come home.” She laughed again. “But not for you two…” She looked at the book in her hands, and then closed it after a moment. She knew what she was going to do. She held the book out to Zexion. “You want it back?” she asked. “YES!” Zexion shouted. “Very well.” She blew on the book. As she did, rose petals blew off of it. Zexion and Axel watched in awe and in horror as they watched a perfectly normal and solid book blew away in hundreds of petals. She smiled. Her fangs showed. “Cool, huh?” she said. Then, she raised her hands. “What are you doing?” Axel asked. She looked at him. “Performing a combined spell.” She said. “If you liked that petal trick, you’ll love this…” A combined spell? Zexion thought, I can’t even do that and I’ve been studying for years! She raised her arms and began to recite from memory: “Moonlit freedom, fast forward time. To Saturday time, to moon risen rhyme. Let the pale moon’s glow everlasting, in vision of the Vampire wing. For the full moon lives, let it live, let it thrive, let it grow and revive. Let the sunlight die, let moonlight breathe: Let the twists of time bend and allow this to be: MOONSHINE FOREVER!!!” As soon as she was done, the land around everyone spun. A day past, another past, and another past. Three days flied by in less than 10 seconds! The moon changed into a full moon and froze there. Rose turned towards Axel and Zexion. She snapped her fingers and the briars around them snapped and fell to the ground, freeing them. “I’ll be back for you two later.” She smiled, again showing her fangs, reminding them of what was after them. “But I wonder who’ll be first…” she then vanished. Zexion looked at Axel. “We need to find Roxas.” Axel looked at him. “Why? He’s Vampire Nobody now.” “He’s still your best friend at heart. Maybe if you talk to him, he’d remember.” “Maybe it’ll work…” Axel said. He and Roxas were best friends, and it worried Axel terribly that he was a Vampire Nobody. “How about I go look for Roxas, and you go look for Marluxia.” “Why?” Zexion asked. “Maybe you can talk some sense into him.” Axel said, before running off. Zexion ran off as well. +++ Marluxia was looking outside of his window, watching the moon. He didn’t notice the change. He closed his eyes. “Rose…” ~FLASHBACK~ Today was the day—the day the doctor had predicted he’d lose Rose forever. Miluara was with his sister outside. She begged him to let her go outside—she hadn’t been outside in months, and she loved to be outdoors. He took her outside, to her favorite place—their rose garden. Miluara had always thought of it as ‘girly’, but his sister had taken care of for them for them. All of her roses were colorful, healthy, and beautiful. She claimed to be able to talk to the roses, to know what they wanted. He always thought she was so silly. He loved that about her. They walked through the garden. Miluara had to help her walk sometimes, because she’d feel somewhat tired. But for the most part she insisted on walking on her own. She looked up at him. “Miluara?” she asked. “Yeah?” “Would you please take care of my roses for me?” Miluara almost lost it. She had always been very protective of her garden, never letting anyone take care of them. But her asking him to take care of them almost made him cry. It was more real than ever—she was going to die. Miluara nodded. “Yeah. I’ll take real good care of them.” He said. Rose hugged him. “I love you, Miluara.” She said. He ruffled her soft hair. All of the sudden, a huge Heartless beast rose from the ground. Miluara stood in front of Rose to protect her. The Heartless attacked. Miluara charged at it and kicked it. It flew back a foot. It charged again. This time, catching him off guard, knocking him to the side. It advanced towards his sister. She stood there, scared stiff. It reared up a glowing orb of power and was about to throw it. “NOOOOO!!!!!” Miluara screamed… ~END OF FLASH BACK~ “NO!” Marluxia yelled. He looked around, realizing that it was only a memory. He put his head in his hands. “I’m sorry…”
Awwww.... Poor Marly... D= IF YOU STOP WRITING THIS, I WILL DIP YOU INTO HOT OIL!!!! And then... and then, I'd revive you again, and dip your remains into ACID!!!! And-and-and THEEEEN!!! I'd... I'd............... .............................. Don't stop writing. -_-; Please. >.>;
OWWWWWW....*cringes in fear* lol, I'm not gonna stop writing my story! i just thought it'd be sorta fun to make that poll, and to see how many people freaked out
It's SOOOOO sad!!! (cries) However, if you stop writing this, I'll make your world into a.... erm... NIGHTMARE WORLD! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
lol :) As i told foxy, I'm not gonna stop writing. its too much fun! I just love to see the reactions of people who think i'd stop writing the story, espcially the one who like the story
Oh....poor Marly!!! You better keep on writing this...or else.... You do not, I repeat, do not, want to know what or else is.... *evil laughter*
YOU'L DO NO SUCK THING! If you did, there'd be no one to write the rest. umm... plz don't talk aboiut drowning ppl in hot oil. I have some mean boys that live up my street, and they killed my cat by drowning it in hot oil, then throwing it in the creek...! -sobs- That part with Marluxia and his sister are soooooooo sad. I'm like trying not to cry but you are. My sister thinks I'm nuts cause she doesn't think that is sad... You should end this story with a very sad flashback that'll draw to peoples attention, please! Like, it shows Rose suffering and dying. That'll be something I will cry over -sobs more- SEE WHAT YOU DID NOW!!!! I AM SAD!!! -sobs alot-
Well, its a sad thing. The ending is going to be nice, and a little sad. But there's gonna be something funny in the end to tie it all together! :) You'll just have to wait and see (ima get up early tomarrow to type, and i HOPE i can can finish the story tomorrow, so i can start on another one :)) And yea, i wanted to make marluxia's story really sad, but you haven't heard sad until you find out Axel's past. It is ***SOOOOOO*** sad!!!!!! *cries* (Its a possible story in the future, maybe...)
Oh gosh.... Where do you get your ideas for all of these stories? You must have an extremly active imagination....
Well, sometimes I just think...and things come to me. Hey, maybe that happens when you have a dream you'll never live out... You live it out in different ways...
nooooooooooooooooooooooooo i would die if you didnt carry on, dam i hate cliff hangers hurry hurry hurry lol nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo