The Vampire Nobody Chapter 10 (LAST CHAPTER!)

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Did you like the story, The Vampire Nobody?

  1. YESYESYESYESYES!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!

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  3. I liked it! Awesome job!

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  5. Wha...? I didn't read it what are you talking about?

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  1. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    THE LAST CHAPTER!!! Enjoy! And thanks to all who read. YOU PPLS ROCK!!!

    ~Chapter 10~

    ~~~Sunday Morning~~~

    Last night, all of the eight of the Nobodies cleaned the entire Castle. All bedrooms were cleaned, all bathrooms were spotless, and all areas were taken care of. Roxas (with the help of Axel) cleaned the attic without any surprises. (Luckily)
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    The next morning, all of them were tired. They had to stay up the entire night to clean, and only got a few hours of sleep. But they couldn’t sleep late, or there would be suspicion. They all sat in the clean living room, with Axel and Zexion telling the entire story of what happened. Luxord laughed.
    “So I got to bite Vexen, eh?” He said with a smile. Vexen shoved him off of the sofa. Luxord looked up at him. “What was that for?” Vexen smirked.
    “THAT was for calling me a wimp!” he said as Luxord sat back on the sofa, confused. Everyone laughed.
    “Which one of us bit Demyx?” Larxene asked. “Me or Roxas?”
    “We weren’t there. We just heard Demyx scream, and when we looked, you two were just standing over him.” Marluxia said. Demyx thought for a moment.
    “I may not remember who bit me, but I DO remember which people pushed me out of the room into the hall to get bitten!!!” Demyx said angrily. Vexen, Axel, Marluxia, Luxord, and Zexion looked the other way. Roxas laughed.
    “Looks like he’ll be getting back at you all.” He said. Demyx suddenly laughed and pointed at Luxord.
    “That reminds me!” he said. “Luxord snores—REALLY loud!!!” Everyone burst out in laughter. Luxord was just plain confused.
    “Huh?” he said. Just then, five Corridors of Darkness appeared, and out walked Xemnas, Saix, Lexaeus, Xaldin, and Xigbar. The Nobodies exchanged hellos to the Nobodies in the living room, who returned them with hellos of their own.
    “So, how’d you like staying here for a week?” Xaldin asked.
    “It was nice.” Roxas said.
    “VERY quiet…” Zexion added.
    “And boring.” Larxene said. Xemnas nodded.
    “I’m glad to hear it.” He said. The five Nobodies walked off to their rooms. The eight in the living room sighed in relief.
    “Needless to say we won’t mention this to anyone, right?” Vexen said.
    “No, let’s go shout it to the world!!!” Larxene said sarcastically. Axel chuckled.
    “They’ll never know…”
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    Xemnas took a quick walk in the Castle, to check that everything was cleaned. All the rooms looked orderly (even Demyx’s), all the halls were swept, and the attic looked fantastic. Xemnas, satisfied, decided to walk out side for some fresh air.
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    He walked outside, and took a deep breath, and then let it out. He expected to smell clean, crisp air, but the air had a different scent. Roses? He thought. He sniffed the air. Yes, definitely roses. He looked around, and his mouth dropped. All along the ground were hundreds, no, THOUSANDS of rose petals!
    “What the…?” Xemnas said…
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    All eight of the Nobodies were still in the living room talking. Roxas had an uneasy feeling, and with it an uneasy look on his face. Axel noticed it.
    “Hey Roxas, what’s up?” he asked. Roxas shrugged.
    “I don’t know…I feel like we forgot something…”
    “Relax!” Axel said. “Xemnas isn’t—“

    “AXELROXASLARXENEVEXENLUXORDMARLUXIAZEXIONDEMYXWHATTHESMOOFAREALLTHESEROSEPETALSDOINGOUTSIDEYOUALLAREINSOMUCHTROUBLE!!!!!!!!!” Xemnas roared. All of the eight members sighed deeply and exchanged nervous looks. All together, they chorused:

    “Uh…..oh….”


    THE END!!!!!!!!!
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    (Note: Xemnas’ rant at the end translates to: “Axel Roxas Larxene Vexen Luxord Marluxia Zexion Demyx what the smoof are all of these rose petals doing outside you all are in so much trouble!!!!!!!!!”)

    (Just so you know :))
     
  2. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    HA! I are smart. =3

    I figured out what Xemnas said ALL by mah-self. XD;

    NICE ENDING!!!! =DDDD

    *le clappes*

    --EDIT--

    WOOTERZ, first one to post! XD

    *brick'd*
     
  3. Black Sinner Twilight Town Denizen

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    Lol, I just KNEW something like that was going to happen! I had a great time reading your story and I can't wait to read any future ones.
     
  4. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Good for you! And thank you! *takes bow and falls out of computer chair*

    OWWWWWWWWWWWW.....

    Thanks! :D I hope to start a new one tomorrow! I'm about to make a thread asking people which story they'd like to see me write! I hope you guys can read it and help me out!
     
  5. sT3pH!e313 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    You do a really great job with your stories. *gives COOL snaps*
     
  6. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Awesome, one again, I luve this part..

    I was laughing so hard!
     
  7. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Yay! thank you! :D

    Thanks! I love wrapping up my stories with funny parts! Some stories wont always end funny, but i like to make em end like that if i can!
     
  8. Sce13 Banned

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    awww,man!!!! I was hoping you'd end it with a sad flashback.
    I thought this story was heartbreaking.... Really sad!!!
     
  9. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    I wanted to, but i didnt want to leave people crying....

    TRUST ME...tomorrow when i get some help picking my next story, there's a sad choice, and then theres a REALLY sad choice! (Its about Axel)
     
  10. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    yay brilliant ending, shame it had to end coz that was a great story, mega lookin forward to the next one
     
  11. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    Great ending for a great story!!! To bad this one is over....Could you do one about Axel??
     
  12. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Great you mentioned it! (btw, thanks!)

    In a minute or two i'm going to make a board with a few different stories, and see which one people want me to write (I'll get to them all, hopefully...)

    And one of them is an Axel one!

    Thanks! I hope to start it today!
     
  13. Yuffieone Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Oh smoof! it ended, garfunkle!

    well, I acctually finished a story not to mention not reading some of them (Redarle) Cough, but yea (claps for you!)

    oh and by the way, I voted, can you guess how?
     
  14. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    yeah, i noticed....*gets keyblade*
     
  15. Yuffieone Merlin's Housekeeper

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    .... Uhh, thinks of something, Noo, nee
    Ni

    any way its a good story it was a pritty satisfying ending as well >.< kind of
     
  16. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    oh..ur good with all ur 'Ni's', but i have stronger weapon....

    IT IT IT IT IT IT IT IT TITIT ITITITITITITITITIT


    IT!
     
  17. Tri-Edge Moogle Assistant

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    absolutely amasing. Very good ending for a very good story. Nice work there very nice
     
  18. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Yay! thanks!
     
  19. riku-josh07 Destiny Islands Resident

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    I knew it! It was too good to be true!

    Great ending! I loved this story!

    YOUSHOULDMAKEMOREOFTHISIT'SSOCOOL!!!!!!!!

    (You should make more of this; it's so cool!)
     
  20. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thank you! *bows and falls out of computer chair*

    OWWWWWWW.....I need to stop doing that, lol :)