Read this please!!!!!! and tell me what you think! Hello people, i posted the beginning of my book before but nobody looked at it so i'm guessing it was boring (even i was bored when i was reading it, and i wrote it!) so i decided that i'd post my favourite bit and see what you think:D it goes through chapter 6-7 so you won't know what's going on but that's you're fault for not bothering to read the begginging! -------------------------- Chapter 6: the mysterious stranger. A few weeks after Eliss’s return (and Meagan’s tantrum) Alex, Zach and Meagan were called to the training grounds on the west of the village. Once they were all there Harry walked out from behind a tree with a young man wearing something was much similar to a cape that had a brim that covered up to half his face. Alex could only make out that he had bright blonde hair and piercing aqua blue eyes. “This man’s name is Heiro and he’ll be replacing me in the third test.†Harry said happily. “So to pass the third test all we need to do is beat him?†Alex said curiously. “That’s correct start when you please†Harry finished. Alex stared at Heiro, he wasn’t sure what to expect from him so he decided to attack first. He immediately enlarged his sword lunged at Heiro. It happened so quickly, Alex could see it happen. Some how Heiro had blocked Alex’s slash and sent his sword flying through the air without moving. A few seconds later Alex was dodging multiple waves of blue from Heiro’s direction as his cape moved in the slightest way. As Alex dodged the last wave, Zach threw his sword to him. Alex caught it and while Zach distracted him and Meagan threw small knives and daggers at him, enlarged his sword and stabbed for Heiro’s heart. Heiro jumped about twenty feet above the ground. Alex saw his sword’s sheath for a few seconds and then another blue wave came at him. He leaped behind a tree, hoping to avoid Heiro’s onslaught. Three started to fall as soon as it came in contact with the blue wave. Alex jumped out from behind the tree and saw that both Zach and Meagan had already been hit. He noticed it in the side of his eye, another blue wave was coming straight towards him. It was too late he couldn’t dodge it. As it came in contact with him, he heard the sound of a sword being drawn and felt his clothes rip and his skin separate as the wave crashed over him… Almost as soon as the wave hit Alex, a dark aura started to pressure down on everyone in the village. Once the dust cleared, Heiro saw that Alex was still standing, if only barely. But something was different. Alex had a dark aura surrounding him. As Heiro landed he saw that Alex’s skin was slowly going as the silver as the pale moon. When Alex raised his head Heiro saw that his eyes were going yellow, like a cat’s eye and his clothes and sword were going bright silver. As Heiro stood he saw that Alex’s hair was slowly growing longer and changing to a dark silver shade. ‘This is going to be a long night’ Heiro thought to himself. A few minutes later Alex stopped changing. Heiro immediately drew his sword, sending a blue shockwave at Alex but Alex charged straight through it slashing at Heiro with his own sword. Heiro numbly blocked it. Sparks flew from both the swords as the energies collided. Alex slashed his sword outwards knocking Heiro’s sword out of the way and punched Heiro in the gut. Heiro numbly dodged his next attack and kicked Alex’s hand sending Alex’s sword flying through the air. As Alex stumbled from the impact Heiro punched him in the gut the kicked him a few inches above the ground, punching him in the face knocking back into a tree. Alex jumped onto the tree and leaped without a weapon at Heiro. Heiro swung at Alex but to no avail, for Alex grabbed Heiro sword and pulled himself to Heiro with it, punching Heiro into a mountain on the way. Heiro got up almost immediately and charged at Alex. Alex grabbed Heiro’s hand and went to throw him, when Heiro brought him down and smashed his knee into Alex’s gut. Heiro grabbed his sword, sheathed and un-sheathed it so quickly it made a blue sound wave charging at Alex. Alex jumped out of the way, grabbed his own weapon and started to slash wildly at Heiro. Heiro blocked blow after blow, pushed Alex’s blade up and punched Alex. Alex barely noticed the hit and dropped his weapon, punching Heiro in multiple places. Heiro tried multiple times to escape but Alex’s barrage wasn’t letting up. Heiro managed to grab Alex’s fist and pulled Alex downwards him punching Alex in the face as he came down. Heiro immediately took the opportunity to leap onto the face of the nearby mountain. As Heiro got his sword ready, Alex charged at him. Heiro blocked Alex’s blow and as Alex’s fist bleeded, Heiro slowly grew more fearful of Alex. Alex had disregarded his own hand now and was hitting Heiro with his other hand and feet. Heiro felt every blow, each making him more fearful. Alex threw Heiro into the nearby lake, jumped in after him. Heiro had now gotten over his fear and was trying to stab Alex in any place possible. Alex ignored this and punched Heiro out of the pool. Heiro barely landed on his feet. Every part of his body was in pain but Alex was acting as if he hadn’t taken one blow. Heiro felt a strange darkness creeping over him… ------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 7: The Innersouls The dark aura over the village was growing heavier as Heiro changed. Heiro blonde hair and skin was going as black as the night. Black sparks were coming off of him as if he was on fire. His fingernails were slowly becoming claws. His eyes were going red. And he was crouching with his hands on the ground as if he was a dog. Alex slowly came out of the pool. When Alex and Heiro saw each other they charged at each other each with a look of hate in their eyes. Alex and Heiro traded blows, as they attacked each other each was creating their own orb of natural energy in his hand. They threw their energies at each other, creating an explosion of silver and black. As they landed they charged at each other only to be stopped by Harry who was in the middle of them both who created a shield that stopped Alex and Heiro in place. After a few hours both Heiro and Alex ran out of energy and Harry let them fall to the ground, knocked unconscious… ----------------------------------------------------- That was only the begginging of chapter 7 just so you know but the rest of it was what you'd call boring (it was the explanation of what happened to them so meh.)
