The Things That Remind Me Of You

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  1. Daenerys Targaryen ok

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    Well I haven't really written a poem in awhile and I decided that I should get back into writing like I used to. I hope it's not too rusty:

    The Things That Remind Me Of You


    Mended hearts
    Blue eyes
    Smoke in our breath
    Dazed and smiling
    Laughter and rainfall
    Sensitive skin
    Soft to the touch
    With a quick reaction
    Hand-holding
    Sweet kisses and urgent hugs
    These teenage years
    We sit idle, we sit in tears
    We sit in a storm of our own emotions
    We wait for a sun
    We wait for a savior
    We wait for a prince
    So I've waited for you
     
  2. Amaury Chaser

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    That's a pretty interesting poem you've got there.

    I loved every word. :) Keep 'em coming!
     
  3. Roxas&Sora4E Traverse Town Homebody

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    That was very good Famous! I really enjoyed reading it. :D Nice work!
     
  4. Daenerys Targaryen ok

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    Thank you :] I'll write more soon.
     
  5. Daxa~ #stalker

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    Naww that was lovely <3
    It was so nicely written,and just....lovely xD
    Keep writing :3
     
  6. Daenerys Targaryen ok

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    D'aw thank you <3!

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Believe


    Say this in your not so human tone
    Look at me with those dull and dismal eyes
    No shine or shimmer
    Slow and steady
    Tell me the woes of your life
    How you stopped believing in everything
    Tell me that those cigarettes won't kill you
    How you're untouchable because of the cruel cruel cruel world
    Tell me how when you're alone you don't wish someone were listening
    Tell me that your life is meaningless
    Tell me how you have no friends and want to die
    Tell me that I don't understand you
    Tell me that no one does
    Tell me that I don't care
    Tell me everything
    But please don't believe it