The story of Roxas

In my free time I made this story and I keep adding to it so I thought I would post it here. (Sorry if this is the wrong section) Please tell me what you think and what I can do to get better. I'm pretty sure I messed up on the format but anyways here it is.

It seemed as if I just woke up from a long dream. Or as if I was just born. But I could feel memories within me. I didn't know what I felt and for a few seconds I just sat on the ground with my eyes closed because I feared what I would find. After a few minutes I brought up the courage to open my eyes. On one side of me there was a forest and on the other side I saw a broken down mansion. And then in a flash I saw something. It just seemed pop into my mind. It seemed as if it was some white creature with two ninja swords. What it meant I was soon to find out because right in front of me a black hole just appeared out of no were. And out walked a mysterious cloaked figure. Little did I know that he would soon be one of my only friends.
“Who are you†I asked.
“At the moment who I am is of no importance it is you who I want to know. Tell me he asked do you know your true name?†He asked me.
“My true name?†I asked.
He then pointed his hand out at me and these golden letters appeared in the air. S O R A. And as he flicked his hand they started moving around creating a whole new word. ROXAS
“What's that supposed to mean?†I asked him.
That is your new name he said to me.
“So who are you?â€
As he pulled of his hood he said, Axel got it memorized? It was hard to describe him he had long Red hair and an odd tear shaped picture underneath both of his eyes.
“This is quite a nice town isn't it?â€
“What's it called?†I asked him.
“Twilight Town. Follow me I want to show you something.â€
Then he just ran off toward the forest and since I had nothing else to do I followed him. After a few minutes he stopped by a ladder and started climbing up it. When I finally got to he top I noticed we were on top of a bell tower.
“Here have this†he said giving me a blue colored ice cream. As I took a lick I felt a salty taste.
“What is this?!†I asked him.
“Its sea salt ice cream†he said “do you like it?â€
“Yeah.â€
“Well it's time to get going†he told me as he got up.
“Were are we going†I asked? Without answering me created another one of his black portals and I knew this time I would be going through it.


As soon as I went through the dark portal I ended up in this room. Well it couldn't exactly be describe as a room. It seemed as if everything was a bluish color on one side and a reddish color on the other side.
“What is this place†I asked?
“It's called betwixt and between.†He told me.
And then at the end I saw another portal. And before I knew it we went through that one as well and ended up in the place that I would call home for a long time.
“Home sweet home.’’ Axel said as he looked around.
“What’s this place called?’’ I asked curiously
“It’s called The World That Never Was. It’s called that because like us it was never supposed to exist.†He explained.
“What do you mean we weren't supposed to exist?!†I asked him angrily.
“That's a story for another time†He told me.
“So can you at least tell me were we are going then?†I asked him calming down.
“Were going to our headquarters, you can meet the other organization members there.†he explained.
“So what exactly is the point of the organization†I asked.
“That's another story for later.†He told me again.
“Can you tell me anything?†I asked him.
“Just wait a bit once we get to the meeting room Xemnes can tell you everything. “Who's....Never mind.â€
As we rounded the corner I saw a big clock tower that reminded me of the one in Twilight Town. And then out of the ground these dark creatures started sprouting out of the ground.
“Ohh great just what we need Heartless.†Axel said sighing.
“Heartless?†I asked.
“Yah story for another time kid common we need to get rid of them.†As he said those words these two flaming chackrams just appeared in his hands.
“Oh yah well since you have no weapons you can just stay to the side and try not to get hurt.†But before he could say another word I blacked out into a mysterious dream that I would always remember.


As I woke up I found myself on a giant round platform.
“Where am I?†I said to no one in particular. And then I heard this mysterious voice.
“The door is still shut. And as it said those words three pedestals rose from the ground on each one a different weapon. On one a wand on another a shield and on the last one sword.
“But don't worry for Power sleeps within you.†Then the voice said, “if you give it form....It will give you strength. Choose well.†So I stepped up to the sword and picked it up. And then all the pedestals started crushing to to the ground and disappearing. And then the platform I was on started breaking and I started falling. Before I knew it, it felt as if I was on solid ground again and as I opened my eyes I noticed I was on another platform.
“You have gained the power to fight†the voice said once more.
“There will be times when you have to fight.†And then heartless started popping up from the ground like before.
“But keep your light burning strongâ€. And with my sword I fought all the heartless till they were all gone. And then the platform broke just as last time but this time I had my eyes open and I saw something that would haunt my dreams forever. There waiting for me was a heartless that was larger then I could imagine.
“But don't be afraid.†the voice said.
“For you hold the mightiest weapon of all. So don't forget. You are the one who will open the door.†As the voice said those last words I woke up from my sleep and summoned the power of the mightiest weapon of all. The keyblade. Before I knew it I was fighting right beside Axel taking out as many heartless as he was. And before I knew it they were all gone.
“Welthat was unexpected†he said. “Well we better get to the meeting room fast before Xemnas starts getting angry, he will want to know about this†and as he said these words I blacked out once more but I knew this time I would actually be asleep.