So I said i'll work on two stories at a time. I am doing my other story at the time but yeah. The other story has a time to do this but at the moment no. I have another story in mind to let the spotlight shine on this character, from Organization XIII. I hope you like this story and there will be chapters, that is if anyone likes it. The Story of Braig Chapter 1 You know, I thought all about it. Sora, he's a kid with heart. Wish I had one like that! Me and Sora are fighting, i'm sacrafiicing my "life" for the team! To complete the mission but.. If I don't make it through the fight, i'll think. Think of the past and more, what I've been through. If I do make it through the fight, there's no point of telling and remembering the past. I'd be impressed and then...we get out hearts and live! But, just in case i'll start telling my past. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ -Past- ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Being a kid is rough you know? Having two eyes is great! No damages on the smooth body, it's all perfect. Until someone moves in my neighborhood. I'm rich, live in a big house in the long way road Hollow Bation, called Radiant Garden. It was all perfect until my dumb self got curious with this neighbor. The new neighbor has a dad, two daughters and three sons. Talk about a family! Sure they needed a mansion for that kind of family! So, I thought of...sneaking over. It's nothing bad particulary...well it IS now. So anyways I sneaked over while things were still unpacking, three trucks full of furniture and more. I can hear laughing from the inside, so instead of standing I ran over to see what's it like in there mansion and maybe-i mean introducing myself! Running inside the mansion it was huge! two stairs, one on left and the other on the right! My mansion we had one! I ran to the left stairs and ran my up 20 steps! It was a work-out alright. Walking down the hall I could hear giggling and more stuff. I could tell which one it was because there was only one door closed. "Ptff, girls!" I yacked. Walking some more there was two halls that led somewhere. I took the right. Walking down there was a door almost shut but wasn't, alittle peep to see the knob wasn't even there! So we my right eye, I peeked through the doorknob's place. I could see...a boy with mixed dark blue-ish grey hair, it was dark hair alright. He had one hair flipped over it was short but still I can see 'both' his eyes. Seems like he was reading something...a book? Looking carefully at it, it WAS a book! He was reading it peacfully and a grin on his face. One thing I won't get is, people reading make them laugh for some reason. Pathetic! When I read a dumb novel I hardly ever laughed! I don't see why he's laughing? So um to ask this kid what he's laughing at, I decided to knock his door ad introduce myself and plenty more. Knocking I can hear the creek of the chair going up like it's been given a chair wedgy! "The door's unlocked and it's open but a peep." the boy said. I nodded to myself and was about to push open with the knob but wait, the boy said another thing with a tiny gasp. " There's no knob, so push the door open and close it by a peep." I nodded and pushed it open wide, until it hit something hard, causing stuff to colaspe to the ground making hard vibrates and stuff. I can tell it was something bad like something expensive or it was just plain nothing but un breakable toys. I walked right in and pushed the door back by a peep, not letting it close and get my stuck with a boy. I looked behind and saw that there was a big brown shelf full of books! Appearantly the books were scattered on the hard wooden floor, lot's of em. Probably 40 of em. Yes it was a big deal. I can see the boy walking over pasty wearing black socks. He knee'd down and took the fallen books into his hands. I decided to help, I mean after all! I was the one who knocked down his precious book and they looked new! " Oh, dude! I'm very, very sorry!" I said helping him pick up his books. He looked up staring at me with no worries and like he hasn't been sleeping for days! " It's ok, just a tiny accident-" I cut in hearing what he just said! " A tiny accident! Dude that was a big accident! I knocked down your new books down to the floor hard!" I was beginning to overreacted. He shooked his head at me and saw me pick his books. When I was picking his books I put one on the shelf then another. I couldn't see what's wrong. "No!" he worridly said strechting his hand out. I turned and saw him with a bit of a worried face, so I cocked my head. " I mean, it's great that your helping me but i'm sorry." I can see him fiddling with his fingers now. " I put them in aplhabet order, book by authors name." he said. I oh'd as if now I knew what I was doing so I carried the books over to the roomy floor place them down gently putting them in scatters. " I'll lay them here! Then after dude, we can look for the author who ever is first then place it in the very top shelf!" I said with a chuckle and grin. He nodded and carried some books over place them scatted as I did. While we were scattering the books the boy started to talk to me. " I never got your name, if it's ok to ask. What's your name?" he asked looking at me. I stuck my hand out and took his shaking it, " The name is Braig! Best sling shot kid in the mansion neighbor hood ha! Well not for long hahaha!" Man was I fool saying something like that to the boy. He smiled alittle with a response he said " I'm Ienzo, I moved here just now, if you noticed we are still unpacking." he said. Ienzo, I like that name for the kid. Not until I figured out his name. " How old are you?" he asked me. Looking up I said " I'm ten, going to grade 6 next month." he grinned and let go of shaking my hand and so did I. " I'm ten also and appearantly I'm going to grade 6 to in the next month." Ienzo said. I nodded giving a smile, " Hope your in my class!" he nodded. So then after that we didn't talk for quite a while, because we were busy placing his books aplhabetically. It sounds to me that this boy is smart for some reason. Ah but I know we were going to be buddies because who ever I talk to eventually likes me! Except for some... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ After placing them in the right order I looked over to Ienzo, he seemed to be realive, and then goes back to the seat he was sitting in. Now before I wanted to ask the question so, I went on ahead and asked the dumb question that was about to disappear in my mind! " Say Ienzo. Why- um were you laughing a little at the book, what's so funny in that book anyway?" There! I said it! Ienzo looked up at me with his dark blue purple eyes saying, " It's just that some lines in this book is funny. But, it was different you see before they said they were going to save the empty heart crystal from turning to evil, it has already turned evil! Without them noticing they already spent ten times in this book and as I expected they now realize that the empty heart crystal was evil. It was a fake, the real one was hiding! There is a riddle but they can't solve it and I think it's kinda dumb when they said " When Under the bucket it goes it, then goes out and swims in another!" So I'm trying to figure out the riddle and then again one of them says a funny line which you can't resist!" Ienzo laughed a little. One thing was that I never understood a word what Ienzo was saying because I lost half his words he said. " Sorry dude but I lost ya." I said scratching the back of my head Ienzo nodding as if he understood. " I know, I kinda get people lost when I say things weird." he said. I nodded and walked to the window. " Dude come over here and see this! Also remember it!" he said staring out the window. Ienzo stood up and walked over leaning over to see too. " Okay you see that house right across from your house?" I asked. Ienzo nodded looking at me. " That's your house?" I shooked my head and pointed out. " Behind that mansion is my mansion. So you just go around the street and there's mine! Mines is just behind that house across from yours." I said. Ienzo nodded. " You have a pool and stuff?" he asked. I laughed alittle " As if! I can't afford one, but I do have a backyard with a swing set and monkey bars that my ...dad..made." I lowered my voice. Man I remember that I wouldn't mention the word dad and there goes my record. The reason why I can't say it , is because he was in a car accident, on the way home from work. Yeap he died that day after he was took in the Radient Garden special hospital! So yea. Ienzo looked at me, man I was gonna cry! Can't i'm a ten year old boy I gotta be a man! Sucking that tears up i looked to him. " Sorry dude, just can't say dad! Sorry dude but i'll explain later later. Anyways-" he interupted me. " I can show you around my mansion. Offer you a snack to." Ienzo said. I put my hand on his head and patted it like he was a dog. " Oh, thanks! Let's head now!" I excitedly said. Not when thing's got worse later. End of Chapter 1. Yeah new story, and hoping im willing to post up a new chapter tomorrow. The same time to postup the new chapter for my other story:D Please comment and tell me how it's like, if I made grammar mistakes, sorry! I'm not good. Thanks.:)
I like this story. It's original and one of the things that I like is that it's redacted in First Person. Is interesting to see the past of Braig and Ienzo. Great job with this one. Keep up the good work. ^_^
Thankyou, and now I shall continue with the story, with the next chapter:) The Story of Braig Chapter 2 So me and Ienzo stood up, exiting his room we were now in the hall. "So where do we start..." Ienzo mumbled. I looked at him, he had a thinking face. Well I THINK he had a thinking face, I can't tell really! It was really quiet in the hallway until some giggles and laughter came. Yeap, it was Ienzo's sisters. Annoying I say! " How about we start with the first floor." he suggested. I nodded and followed him down the stairs. To make this "walking" down the stairs interesting I hoped on the railing and holded on tight and slid down my way. I didn't want to fall and break my arm again...like last time. It was a pretty nasty fall, i'd say. As I reached I can see Ienzo still walking down the stairs. He seemed to think that was danger, which was, but at the same time he thought it was funny. I bet it was my goofy face that made my way sliding down, haha! " Dude one day, you got to try this! It's awesome and it's super awesome!" I believe I said that twice, sometime in my childhood, I have no idea what I say sometimes. Ienzo nodded at me when he was reaching the last step of the stairs. "Come, i'll show you our backyard." Ienzo said walking down the far right door. I nodded wondering. Wondering what his backyard would look like, probably bigger than mines. He put his hands on the knob twisting it, hearing a click. Then Ienzo pushed the door open, and we both walked in the backyard. Amazing! I ran in the grass with my eye's sparkling. "W-Woah! Ienzo dude! Your backyard is better than mine and larger!" I said. But there was more to say but I was to excited. Almost pee'd my pants when I saw that wonderful swing. Lesson number one, swings are fun to ride and you can feel like you can fly! It's the only way to feel like to fly. Lesson number two... do not jump off the swing, when your swinging! You can cause yourself to break a bone. Trust me, I've already been through it. So I ran to the swing and jumped on it, with my bum sitting on that nice black comfy seat. Ienzo walked forward and sat on the next swing. We holded on to the chains and swinged out leg. Back and forth, back and forth, until we reached high. Close your eyes while your on the swing, it feels weird and tickle-ish at some point. "You like swinging?" Ienzo asked me. Well it was a simple answer, " Yeah! Swinging is really awesome I mean look at this, we're swinging high up!" I said cheerfully. Now lesson number three, never try to stand on the swing, while your swinging high. Trust me I've been through that and it wasn't pretty, I went through sergery, at the age of 3! Swinging I can see Ienzo. Having his eyes closed and grin. Feeling the wind I say. So I closed my eyes to and felt the wind blowing through my face. It was a radical feeling. Until thing's got worse until you can hear a whoosh flying. "Woah!" Ienzo cried. I opened my eyes and the next thing I see is Ienzo on the grass laying there. Like he was dead or dying. I put my feet to the ground. The swing still swung, slowly because of the feet on the ground. I jumped off and ran over to Ienzo, kneeling down. "Dude you alright!? What happened? One thing I knew you were swinging next thing I know your on the grass laying there dead!" I exclaimed. I can tell there was gonna be blood. "I-I-" is all Ienzo said. Putting my ear abit closer to hear he said in a shaky voice. " I was pushed off." Now that was unexpected, who would push someone off the swing when they're swinging. Plain wrong. Lesson number 4. Standing behind someone when there swinging, you never know when they're but, swing or leg hits you in the face, knocking you down. Trust me I've been there and my lip was swollen from that horrible- ugh! Accident. Also! Never push a kid off the swing, you never know if you can I don't know, KILL him!? Yeah that's right! I'm talking to you John from grade 3! John Wisker! Well it's a long story. Let's just say I was swinging until someones hands pushes my off, sending me flying to the monkey bars! Hitting my face! But that's a different story. Back to Ienzo and me! So I looked at him whom was still lying there looking dead. " You hurt yourself anywhere?" I asked. Well I needed to know because, I've been through many injuries with many scars on my legs. Luckily my face is clear. Ienzo shooked his head and tried to sit up. I helped. He sat up and put his hand over his right knee. " Dude, remove your hand away from your knee for a second." I asked. He did remove his hand and seeing it. There was blood, it was spreading on his pants. Damn that person who pushed him. "Your gonna be okay, hey. Are you able to stand up?" I asked. Ienzo looked at me and stretched his hands out to me. I took my hands in his and pulled him up. For sure I hear a whimpy voice for 5 seconds. It wasn't Ienzo though. Someone else. I guess someone is spying on us, teasing Ienzo. As Ienzo stood up I turned around and bended down with my arms behind my back. " I'll carry ya. Too where ever there are bandages." I said. One thing, this was a nice thing to do, what's not nice was when you have a bleeding knee some kid comes over and kicks you causing you to bleed more. John Wisker!!! Ienzo nodded and slowly hopped on my back, putting his hands around my neck, I put my arms under his legs to carry properly and to keep him up. "Thanks." Ienzo said. I nodded and carried him inside the mansion.I carried him in and stopped and walked abit slower. " Where do I go heal you?" I asked. Ienzo pointed up the stairs to the washroom. " The washroom, it's upstairs right by my room." I nodded and walked to the stairs. " Hold on tight and don't slug my back down because that causes me to fall, and promise. I won't drop you." I said. Ienzo nodded and rised up on my back alittle more. Slowly we headed up the stairs. Oh thing's got worse later, i'll tell ya. With Ienzo's family, but yeah nothing got better. End on Chapter 2 I hoped you liked it and my apologies for bad grammar and spelling mistakes. Please comment if you like and tell me what you think:)
Good job with this chapter. I like it! ^_^ I like how you describe everything that happens in the story. Keep it up.
Thankyou very much. Anyways, it has been a long time since I typed up the last chapter. Well let's see how you like this chapter. Decided to put my font colour, change it alittle:) The Story of Braig Chapter 3 As me and Ienzo climbed the stairs up, yeap. I can sense things were getting worse. I mean, Ienzo is putting his life though a horrible example. Never know what happens to this guy. Anyways, as I carried my new friend Ienzo up the stairs, a bouncy huge ball came flying down the stairs. Haunt of the ball, I say. "Look out Braig!" Ienzo pointed to the bouncing ball, coming towards them. I looked up, seeing a ball three stair steps away from me. "Oh dear god." I sighed. "Hold on Ienzo, things are gonna get jumpy!" I said. Running down the stairs, I turned with a duck and jumped onto the rails. I'm very talented, after all, my cousin Eddy teached me how to do this! I thank him so much, I didn't expect this to be...um, usefull! I grabbed tight to the rail and began to climb up, seeing a bright light thingy hanging on the cieling center, I stood up on the rail. It was slippery, but I tried to hold on tight. Ienzo's finger nails pressured on around me, sounds like this guy was scared! So, I ran upwards and jumped straight to the big huge light thing! Whatever it was, I didn't have that in my place...I might have, I don't really pay attention to my mansion. "What are you doing?" Ienzo scaredly said. "Watch Ienzo, this is called...um.. the Braig-ster!" I came up automatically. Ienzo cocked his head and snickered. "Hold tighter! Things are gonna get um...swingy!" I came up with...again. I reached my hands out to the huge lights, grabbing on. I was really lucky... last time I did this I flew right on my Aunt on my first try. I broke my arm, but my Aunt, she had a few broken ribbs, broken leg, bloody nose. Yeap, asking? I was grounded for two years. "Braig...I'm slipping!" Ienzo cried. I looked down, HOLY! If this Ienzo dropped down, he would have to replace his leg! Not letting that happen, I just met this guy today! Reaching my hands out, I grabbed him tight and pulled him up. Looking down, I came see a butler walking with a soft matress, probably moving the stuff in. Well duh! They're unpacking things out to set it in their awesome mansion! "Will your leg hurt if we land on the matress?" I asked, making sure. Ienzo looked at me, "If I'm on your back, then no." Ienzo said looking down. " 'Kay." Jumping down, Ienzo was on my back, trying not to fall. I was going to land obn my feet, but that was just a vibration to my feet, like I'm a drumb or that triangle intsrument! Falling down I yelled out to the butler "Look out!" The butler noticed with his eyes widened. "Ienzo!" is what his first words were. "..." was what I said. Nothing, but focusing on the matress, we were lucky. We actually landing on the matress, with Ienzo on my back, he wasn't hurt. That was good. "You okay dude!?" I asked, worried. Ienzo nodded and laughed. " That was fun!" he said. Wow...didn't expect that, mostly when i ask that they respond, "What the hell was that? You almost fricken' injured my precious body!" they complain. But Ienzo just laughed. I rubbed my neck laughing alittle. The butler came over and looked at Ienzo. "Ienzo, Are you alright? You msut come with me at once to check up on you!" The butler said. I sighed, looking at Ienzo. "Well...I'll see you tomorrow." I said. Ienzo looked at me, "Promise? I had fun today, Braig. I'll come visit you, dude." he said. I smiled and shook his hand. " Feel better! Also, I'll be waiting!" I said smiling. Ienzo nodded and waved, I nodded and turned back around walking out the mansion. That was nice, meeting Ienzo, I bet we're like um gonna be pals. As I walked out the mansion, I can see the trucks still there, with people carrying furniture inside. This was a fun day. ~Braig's Home~ I was in my room, with my barefeet, shorts and a white t-shirt. I took a bath. My hair was still drying from the water, but...least I smell good and fresh! Looking over, the sun was going down, it was getting darker. It's really fun having a cool friend, espically when the friend is close to you. An interruption came in. It was mom. "Braig sweety, you haven't said a word since you came home from that place." she said. I looked at her and grinned. " I was just thinking of what to do next, I mean... he's cool and all but, he has like two sisters and three brothers!" I said. My mom nodded and sat on my bed patting on the bed for me to sit next to her. I nodded and ran over, jumping on the bed. " Well sweety, it's hard to have a brother and sister. They're all the same, no matter what." she cheered. I looked at her, that's not what i meant. I looked at her and held her hand. Tose soft motherly hands, the lotion she puts on, the work she puts on them. They're nice. "Mom, that's not what I meant...I meant..I want to have a brother or sister. Ienzo's like one to me, he's cool and fun but-" My mom picked me up on her legs. " I know sweety, it's lonely not having one, but you'll have friends, if Ienzo is like a brother to you then you can tell him that. But..onto to something else sweety. What are you going to do tomorrow?" she asked changing the subject. I looked at her. "I invited Ienzo over to our place. Let him visit my place!" I grinned. My mom nodded and kissed my forehead. " Your such a sweety. I'll prepare supper okay? If you need I'll be in the kitchen." she said smiling. I nodded and layed on my bed alone. I was alone now, but I decided to look out the window. I can see Ienzo's place. Seems like there was a moving party. I can see his family but...where's Ienzo? I looked closer with my eyes, there he was. He was being pushed in a triangle by his three brothers. That's low. I ran over to my cupboard, and took out a thing I adore. My slingshot. I ran over and grabbed a rock pebble. I had a collection. Putting on pebble in my slingshot, I focued carefully on the first bro. "Just stand right there and laugh Ienzo's bro. Your coming in for a but-a-thon!" I whispered to myself. Letting going it became like a pinball. Hitting the three bro's. Booy-yah Braig-o! You scored! I grinned, the bro's just rubbed they're pretty buts and ran off scared. I can see Ienzo he looked right straight to my window. He saw me. I waved, and I see Ienzo turned around giving thumbs up. Damn, I'm so proud! ~Next Day~ "Sweety wake up, it's 1:04 p.m.!" My mom called out from down the hall. I was lazy, alot. I'm a heavy sleeper. "Ughm. I'm coming, just um... million days more." I mumbled, under my covers. "Million days over? But you won't be alive probably." said a voice. Ienzo! I lifted up and looked at Ienzo rubbing my eyes. "Dude! What are you doing here." I said smiling. Ienzo laughed alittle, "You invited me over remember?" Ienzo said. I nodded, " Oh yeah...wait dude let me change, wait downstairs or stay in my room or watch me. I'll be changing, you can play with my toys if you'd like." I said jumping out my bed. Ienzo nodded, " 'kay." End of Chapter 3. Well hoped you liked it:D Sorry or grammar and mistakes, please comment if you'd like:D
