The story of Bexmar...

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  1. Amber PLUR

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    I've suddenly been inspired!

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    Chapter I


    Amber was on the computer, talking to her best friend on msn. She was also hanging out on KH-Vids, a website she visited often. She checked some other sites, deviantART, Youtube, etc. Her creations were doing well. It was a pretty good morning.... so far.

    She was having a blast hanging out online, when her mom told her to get off the computer. Ugh, no fair Amber thought as she said goodbye to all her friends and logged off. Her mom came in and told her she needed to babysit her younger brothers while she went to some sort of meeting. Amber thought about it. Alex and Scott were taking a nap, and Ryan was playing video games. Simple enough, Amber accepted. Not that she really had a choice, but whatever.

    Amber was in the kitchen, looking for something to make for dinner, when she heard a strange whooshing noise, followed by Ryan screaming. She dashed into the living room, only to see a cloaked figure trying to grab her brother. "Leave him alone!" Amber said.

    "And just why should I do that?" The man asked.

    "Because..... because I said so!" She replied trying to look tough, but failing quite misrebly.

    He just stood there. "And why should I listen to you? You look weak. There's nothing you could do to me!"

    Amber knew he was partially right. She was weak, but she would protect her brother at all costs. She looked around for anything she could use as a weapon. She grabbed the flags she used to dance with, and threw one at him. A distraction for only a few seconds, Amber grabbed Ryan and pushed him across the room. He was a little scraped up, but safe. "Run!" She called. At first he didn't want to go, but the look in his sister's eye told him everything.

    "Well then," the man started, "I guess I'll have to settle for you!" He tried to grab Amber, but she moved too quickly. While trying to get her, the man's hood flew off. Dang, he's ugly! was Amber's first thought. The man finally got frustrated and snapped his fingers. Half a second later, a bunch of strange black creatures popped up. Oh crap was her last thought as the creatures started walking towards her. The last thing she saw was black. A whole lot of black.


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    There ya go! This pretty much popped up out of nowhere, but I figured I should write it down.
     
  2. Demyxfan Moogle Assistant

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    Like the story line you have going there! The ugly person must be Xadalin! Xadalin: HAY!*gets lanced by Xadalin*
     
  3. Amber PLUR

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    ... actually no.. you'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out :P *goes to work on next chapter*
     
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