The Secret Eye.

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  1. Jordier0xs0x King's Apprentice

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    Hi everyone. I have been wanting to write a story for a while now...
    Its not about Kingdom Hearts....But anyway...
    I have even written a blurb XD

    Sorry about Chapter One how It Is so short, I will make the others longer.


    Darkness Is taking over the land and
    the land of light Is slowly fading away.
    But King Nashaki Isn't taking action,
    why?
    Anaiya can only hope for the
    best and fight the darkness while
    she unravels the clues of the
    Dronaki Eye.​


    ~Chapter One: In The Shadow~
    Soft murmuring rolled around In the dark room lit only by a small fire, but even then It was as Dark as It was outside. The tall wooden table held nothing upon It and Eleven Members sat around the wooden table.
    Anxious eyes filled the room, scarred eyes. Drake realized whenever his eyes fell upon the other members they would look away. Of course he couldn't see what other parts of faces would drop because of the skeleton masks, but It was fun enough making the eyes drop, If he could see anything else on their faces he would of burst out laughing.
    Drake could hear Luke sighing and fidgeting In his seat.
    "Whats the matter?" Drake broke the silence of the two,
    "Nothing...But he Is late and whenever he Is late he Is angry" Luke turned his eyes to Drake. Drake had to admit that Luke was right, various times The Dark One was late he was always angry, even at Drake who was his son.
    Suddenly the door burst open and a couple of people jumped out of their seats, even he. A black figure came from outside first, then a man In red robes and a blood red mask, Shi'tan, The Dark One, or In other words Drake's father.
    Even with the mask on Drake could see Shi'tan was angry. He always knew when his father was angry.
    "DRAKE!" His father yelled and Drake jumped
    "Y-yes Lord Shi'tan?" Even If The Dark One was Drake's father, he still had to could him by name "Didn't I tell you to deal with Nashaki's little brat guards?" Drake nodded slowly "And didn't I tell you to do It straight away?" Drake nodded once more "Then why weren't they destroyed" Drake didn't know what to say, The truth was the guards killed Muluca (his old companion) and nearly killed himself.
    Of course he could of used his powers but Shi'tan said his powers were forbidden so he struggled
    "I'm s-sorry my Lord, but me and Muluca--" He got cut of
    "Yes, I heard about Muluca, you obliviously need training, Drake" Shi'tan looked across the room, each time his eyes passed each person, the people would shudder. "This goes for everyone, do not disappoint me" His voice had an edge to It.
    Drake heard Luke breathing deeply, scared and The Dark Lord must of sensed It because his eyes stopped to a halt on Luke "And you Luke..." he began, almost smiling ",you haven't disappointed me me once this year, well done" Drake felt a flash of jealousy and slowly shook It off No, don't get angry at Luke he sighed. It was hard trying to do your best.
    Once the meeting was over, Drake felt his stomach didn't have a knot In It anymore. His father had been picking on him a lot lately and It was starting to get annoying.
    "Drake?" Luke had caught up him with
    "Mm?"
    "Are you angry at me?" Luke peered towards him
    "No, why?"
    "Its just...your father has been picking a lot on you lately and I thought--"
    "Hey don't worry about It" Drake had stopped and looked at Luke "You deserve it, mate" Luke nodded and they kept walking towards their rooms "What do you think will be our next tasks?" Drake thought for a moment, what would be their next tasks? "I'm...I'm not sure" Drake had a bit of a shake In his voice and Luke seemed to notice It too.
    Once back to the rooms room, Drake went Into his door and collapsed on his bed In exhaustion. Thoughts tumbled Into his head as he realized there was a letter on the floor, nearly under the door. He went and picked It up and turned It around to the back where a black eight sided star with an eye In the middle, made by wax, lay. He opened the letter and read It:

    Drake,
    This time you will be with Luke, and you will try and sneak Into the Castle Of Light and steel the Dronaki Eye. DO NOT disappoint me. You may use your powers.
    Signed,
    Shi'tan, The Dark One.

    His signature of the eye In the eight sided star was at the bottom.
    Drake sighed In Disbelief I cant believe It! He didn't dare to shout out loud, In case The Dark One was watching. This task was almost Impossible because The King always had The Eye guarded carefully.
    At least I'm with Luke, but thats what he thought last time...


    ~Chapter 2: In Winters Heart~