the riku song

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  1. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    has anyone seen 'the cloud song' and ' the sora song'? well, today, i thought of the the riku song. this is totally origonal and i made it up today. here it goes:

    THE RIKU/ MILD ROXAS BASHING SONG
    BY: TUMMER73
    my name is riku
    i have a blindfold
    it's cool becuause
    i can see right through it

    i fall of buildings
    to catch a keyblade
    so i can go and
    KILL TE ROXAS!

    i forgot the rest. what do you think so far???
     
  2. venster You never heard of me, but I pop in time to time

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    Doesn't match the melody.

    =/
     
  3. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    yes it does the way i sing it. but i don't have a microphone, so i can't sing it.
     
  4. venster You never heard of me, but I pop in time to time

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    what? O-o you can't change the original melody other wise it's not similar to the Sora or Cloud song.

    This could help a little with the beginning...
    in the Sora and Cloud song the first line has 4 syllables. "My name is Riku" has 5 syllables. Maybe you could change it to "I am Riku"
     
  5. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    k. sorry, but i like it my origonal way. so, other than that how's the song.
     
  6. venster You never heard of me, but I pop in time to time

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    *sigh* Sorry if I'm sounding harsh, but sure kudos for you for making the lyrics....but the melody and rhyme has to be there, if you wanted it be like the Sora or Cloud song.
     
  7. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    well, i did it during class today. i just made it up word for world on the spot. we were having a little bit of a free period. the funny thing was that my friend thought i rehearsed it.
     
  8. Xemnas7355 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Yay!!! I love the Sora Song!!!! *sings* I am Sora Here's my keyblade.......
     
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    The Sora Song was way better than the Cloud Song. At least I thought so.

    Yeah, you need to rhyme it. Doesn't match up the way it should.
     
  10. venster You never heard of me, but I pop in time to time

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    I think I like the sora song more too.
     
  11. Xemnas7355 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    And I will Fight with Xahenhort Oh my gosh that rhymes with Voledmort!
     
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    I love that part!

    Voldemort: You stole all my hair!
     
  13. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    sue me if i didn't rhyme.i know abunch of songs that don't rhyme. i was bored in class, and i wanted to post it. all i wanted to know was HOW YOU GUYS LIKED IT!!!
     
  14. Xemnas7355 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    It was pretty good!
    Hehe I love that part about Voldemort too!
    *watches vid*
    LOL
     
  15. venster You never heard of me, but I pop in time to time

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    how can we like it if it doesn't rhyme or go the right way. O-o

    -hums the Demyx song-
     
  16. Xemnas7355 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    What is the Demyx song?
     
  17. venster You never heard of me, but I pop in time to time

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    It's my version of the Sora/Cloud song. xD But I didn't complete it still....
     
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