the riku song

has anyone seen 'the cloud song' and ' the sora song'? well, today, i thought of the the riku song. this is totally origonal and i made it up today. here it goes:

THE RIKU/ MILD ROXAS BASHING SONG
BY: TUMMER73
my name is riku
i have a blindfold
it's cool becuause
i can see right through it

i fall of buildings
to catch a keyblade
so i can go and
KILL TE ROXAS!
​

i forgot the rest. what do you think so far???

 

Doesn't match the melody.

=/

 

yes it does the way i sing it. but i don't have a microphone, so i can't sing it.

 

what? O-o you can't change the original melody other wise it's not similar to the Sora or Cloud song.

This could help a little with the beginning...
in the Sora and Cloud song the first line has 4 syllables. "My name is Riku" has 5 syllables. Maybe you could change it to "I am Riku"

 

k. sorry, but i like it my origonal way. so, other than that how's the song.

 

*sigh* Sorry if I'm sounding harsh, but sure kudos for you for making the lyrics....but the melody and rhyme has to be there, if you wanted it be like the Sora or Cloud song.

 

well, i did it during class today. i just made it up word for world on the spot. we were having a little bit of a free period. the funny thing was that my friend thought i rehearsed it.

 

Yay!!! I love the Sora Song!!!! *sings* I am Sora Here's my keyblade.......

 

The Sora Song was way better than the Cloud Song. At least I thought so.

Yeah, you need to rhyme it. Doesn't match up the way it should.

 

I think I like the sora song more too.

 

And I will Fight with Xahenhort Oh my gosh that rhymes with Voledmort!

 

I love that part!

Voldemort: You stole all my hair!

 

sue me if i didn't rhyme.i know abunch of songs that don't rhyme. i was bored in class, and i wanted to post it. all i wanted to know was HOW YOU GUYS LIKED IT!!!

 

It was pretty good!
Hehe I love that part about Voldemort too!
*watches vid*
LOL

 

how can we like it if it doesn't rhyme or go the right way. O-o

-hums the Demyx song-

 

What is the Demyx song?

 

It's my version of the Sora/Cloud song. xD But I didn't complete it still....