The Pain When You're Gone

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  1. Princess Rapunzel Flower, gleam and glow

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    My world was so bright when I was with you
    You were the only one who made me laugh, smile
    I always wished we would never part ways

    Now, far away from you, my heart is crying in pain
    In this new place, with unfamiliar faces and places
    I've become a lost wolf, without you to guide me
    To take my hand

    On the last day we were together,
    As you walked toward your house
    I counted the final steps I saw

    When I left, the face I knew so well started to vanish
    My heart cried secretly, I showed happiness to my family
    Just to hide my sorrow

    Please, help me remember
    Remember the times we'd spent together
    The moments we had
    And erase this pain when you were gone​

    A poem I made, telling my sadness when I had to leave someone special a few years ago. A friend I made in fourth grade, we'd eat at lunch and talk. I really miss him! TT-TT
     
  2. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Oh, it's tough when a good friend moves away. Do you still talk to this person? I hope you were able to keep in touch, becuase judging by this poem you missed them very much. Great job.
     
  3. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    This is so touching...great poem...hopefully, you'll be able to meet again...if not, there's always memories to bind you...:) :glomp:
     
  4. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    The same here, I feel sorry for you, but good job ^^.
     
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