Don't ever tell anyone that I wrote something like this. __________________________________________________________________________________ Tell me boy Will you see what I have seen? Let me know Will you be where I have been? Do you think You will go where I have gone? Don't you see? How these things were a part of me..... Where you'll go, boy, it won't matter none When you see the world You'll know what needs to be done It's all in front of you Don't let it pass you Just raise your fist high and say "I will be the one"
very good. you could have kept to the a b a b rhyming scheme better, but it works well as a free verse too. just a question though: is this supposed to be in this section, or in the Poetry and Lyrics subforum?
EPIC FAIL . . . at least on where you were supposed to put this. This should be in the poetry section. I liked the rythm of the whole thing and I like the way it's going or the point of the song. You should keep up the good work, in the poetry section. ~Moved lol
