The New Keyblade War

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Number13Roxas, Jun 9, 2007.

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Should I continue?

  1. Yes, I'm interested

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  2. NO, taking some writing lesson's dude.

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  3. Maybe . . .

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  1. Number13Roxas King's Apprentice

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    Kingdom Hearts
    The Destiny of the Keyblade Master

    Prologue:
    A beautiful rose was blooming in the middle of the desert, a flower in a field that had very few flower bushes, more crab grass. Then out of the blank a man stepped on it crushing it and grinding on it with his foot.

    “There are no symbols of hope in my kingdom.†Said the cloaked warrior. The man wore robes that were worn by the nobodies in the Organazation XIII myth.

    Many myths are in the worlds but none as more nostalgic then the legend of the Keyblade, every time when darkness or light grows strong a keyblade master of light or darkness increases the smaller side. The keyblades were created by the Chaser’s the beings that were guardians of the one world. But these are myths and bedtime stories only parts of them are true and some are forgotten, like Sora’s.

    The man walked up with an army behind him that was composed of Heartless and Nobodies. They continued to march loudly like thunder in a storm and then at last they halted as the cloaked man raised his hand. The army ceased and stood silently. Nobodies can talk but its quite monotone, the only ones thought to have expression are the mythical Organization nobodies Xemnas, Xigbar, Xaldin, Vexen, Lexeaus, Zexion, Saix, Axel, Demyx, Luxord, Marluxia, Larxene and Roxas.

    The cloaked warrior looked at a man who was wearing the armor of the Keyblade Knights or to some known as the Chasers. The man laughed at the fallen body. The man was trying to move with no success. The cloaked figure took off his hood to reveal a face.

    “Remember me?†asked the man.

    The Chaser very weary moved his head up and looked at his face. “Xehanort?â€

    Xehanort laughed and nodded his head slowly. He kicked the body of the Chaser out of his way and leaned down to pick up the keyblade that the Chaser contained. His hand glowed as a black aura surrounded it and it transformed to a black keyblade that he had created when his heartless possessed a young boy. Xehanort smiled and raised the keyblade up to the sky the clear sky suddenly became dark as storm clouds began to surround the desert. The Nobody troopers screamed a pushed yell of happiness and cheer for their General’s new weapon. And as the sky blackened a large sound of marching came from the distance. And slowly a figure appeared in black garments woven by fairies. He walked slowly with light seeming to appear in the darkened desert. His army was massive but not as large as Xehanort’s and the army the man possessed was composed of people from so many other worlds. Then at last the leader became more visible, he was a tall young man who had to be twenty five at least. Slowly he drew his main weapon a keyblade that shined beautifully gleaming with light. He also had a shield on his right arm that was identical to the symbol of a dead monarch, he also had a staff used by a great wizard.

    Xehanort had a slight sigh of amusement at the leader and said quietly, â€Sora.â€
     
  2. Xejicka Twilight Town Denizen

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    That's interesting. Give me a message when you make more chapters!
     
  3. naminesgirl Merlin's Housekeeper

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    that was........SWEET,AWSOME,GREET!!!!!!!!!!!! tell me what happens next,if you don't tell me i will explode!!!! that happens to me sometimes:D
     
  4. Number13Roxas King's Apprentice

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    Wow, much better reaction then my last fan fic, thanks.

    As for the next chapters heres a small summary of the basic idea I have, the keyblade masters true purpose is to balance light or darkness whenever a side grows stronger, Xehanort was to strengthen darkness again but corrupted the cycle by continuing to exist after his purpose was fufilled
     
  5. namine_of_kh2 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Nice job.

    (this is the message I type when my message is too short)
     
  6. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    Not bad...thstory seems interesting...Just try to make the chapters a bit longer ok?
     
  7. Luka Deafening silence

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    good job
    please make some more
     
  8. ♥AL90♥ Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Coolio!

    (That is my favorite word to say when I see something awesome!)
     
  9. yushe\sora Twilight Town Denizen

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    OMG!!!!:eek: That was sssooo sweet:D
     
  10. kingdom945 Banned

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    Well, everyone obviously loves sora. I liked it, but
    is anything about sora coming up??
     
  11. OmnicientKH Merlin's Housekeeper

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    It would be better if you didn't start every sentence with 'The man' or if you used more dangling modifiers, instead of just straight forward sentences-but Yes very interseting, very good.
     
  12. Number13Roxas King's Apprentice

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    Well, I don't want to spoil it but lets just say that Sora is much stronger and wiser after this ten year gap.

    Here's chapter one.

    Chapter One- The Funeral\

    The funeral began very slowly, all who were present were very sad some were barely able to hold back the tears in their eyes. For the kind and gentle king of the worlds was dead, murdered ruthlessly by a mysterious figure in the night. The Court Wizard Donald wore his most formal black robe and could not even describe how much he cared for him when King Mickey helped Donald become a wizard. The leader of the King’s knights Goofy was very sad an extreme rarity for a cheerful person but he was blubbering out tears by the time he walked up to the tabernacle and could not say a word but, “Oh, Mickey!!†Sora and Donald had to quickly drag Goofy away from the coffin as he continually sobbed while he was being dragged down the stairs.

    The last person to speak was Riku. The speech he gave was the most memorable of them all. “King Mickey, was a great warrior, a kind king, and a good friend to all of us. He, he could always make everyone happy with his wonderful smile and laugh, I, I sometimes could become happy just by seeing him.

    King Mickey believed in me. He believed in me when no one did, or even myself for that matter. King Mickey made me understand that just because I have darkness in my heart, it doesn’t mean I’m evil. I truly was so changed when he said that at Castle Oblivion. I sometimes even wonder if I would be here the way I am if I never met him, and the answer undoubtedly is no. I can say this without a doubt, meeting King Mickey was the best thing that happened. He was the only one who made me believe in myself after I had done such stupid things, he was so wise and . . . and,†Riku began to cry “I miss him so much.†Riku walked away as a long tear came down from his right eye he looked at the open casket and turned away very slowly.

    The King was buried that day at the hedges, Queen Minnie could barely stop from running up to the coffin begging her husband to wake up. In his tombstone it would always say “Here Lies King Mickey Mouse, Friend to us All.â€

    Sora looked to the Queen, “How did it happen?â€

    The Queen lowered her head sadly “I don’t know.â€

    Jimminy Cricket popped out of the Queen’s pocket, “All we found was an envelope, it has a keyhole on it.â€

    Sora “A keyhole?â€

    Riku walked to Sora, “Whoever made this was real specific on who opens it.†He said casually.

    Sora walked into the hallway with Jimminy and Riku. He drew out his keyblade and pointed it at the envelope. A light glowed from the keyblade and a beam of light flashed and hit the keyhole. The keyhole faded away to show a seal on the envelope that looked like five keys in a circle. Sora looked at the seal closely, he recognized four of them. One was Sora’s another was Riku’s, one looked like the King’s and the fourth was hard to recognize at first but it seemed to be the keyblade that Riku used when he fought Sora at Hallow Bastion when Riku was possessed by Xehanort’s heartless.

    “What is it Sora?†Asked Riku?

    “Um, uh nothing, nothing Riku.†Sora replied quickly. Sora opened the envelope and saw a letter inside, it was written on very old parchment paper it that had tears on the edges. Sora looked at the letter curiously, the writing was old fashioned cursive and written in a fine black ink. As Sora began to read it the letter seemed to be more like a poetic story than a letter if anything at all. The letter read . . .

    “Thou must know thee of great discord,
    In thee past of old a mighty man there once was,
    He was kind at beginning, but tried to become a lord
    The Darkness would spread as War does,
    The war of keys,
    The world would scatter to many,
    He let many suffer despite their pleas,
    If bare ye question I will answer any
    Take your boat and come to the darkness den,
    Go to the Forgotten Garden.â€
     
  13. naminesgirl Merlin's Housekeeper

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    WRITE MORE OR ELSE.....um......:blink::blink:........well i will tell you as soon as i think of it...