The link of Reality and Fantasy

Reality the one who bears all the pain
Fantasy the one who can escape with ease
But the shear one life one body
One heart that beats as two
Two souls that unite as one

Reality bears the pain more with fantasy
Fantasy seems more real with reality
Together they are one
No matter how part they are

 

That is a fantastic poem and very true. Yet again you've written a wonderful poem sis.

 

Thanks sis gald you like it as always

 

Of your best.
Loads of spelling mistakes though. It confuses some lines like the third.
Good though.

 

Very good poem, i really liked it. Made my think for a moment. :D

 

it's very nice and very ture