The Glass Poem

You are the passing wind I cannot catch
You're drifted away into the stars
And I hold alone
You are hurting me
It's ending the beating of my heart
But I still feel it deep within
You are the fire of my desire
A passion tossed aside the wind
I feel it within, more than words
I know that my heart is swaying
After chasing faded dreams
My searching fingertips are carrying bitterness and sorrow
Into eternity of which time cannot return
But you touch, and you feel
The crevices inside of my mind
My beautiful memories with you have cracked
The meaningless kisses we exchanged
The thousand times I called your name
This accumulating sadness is filling me
I am embraced by dawn's light in a silver shade
It overflows from a scar I cannot erase
My tears, droplets in a mist
They are traced with my own finger
Your smile is frozen in time
Your kind, gentle words only fill me
With the echoes of the hollowing silence
I am bathed in your cold eyes
The memories of these feelings
Are vanishing, disappearing
This sweet melody that I hear
It was never here to begin with
Although I try, and I persist
I can never enwrap myself with these swaying emotions
My desperation is enveloping me
I am drowning, suffocating, bleeding
Because you are the bullet
To my heart that is about to break
And with a single touch
It shatters
Like fragile glass

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This is one of the very first poems I wrote when I was young, so if it makes no sense and it sounds bad, that's why. XD And don't worry, I'm not upset...this is just a very depressing poem. lol​

 

it sounds depressing, but it's better than any other poems i've read

 

lol Yeah, it is depressing. XD Ironically, I was in a happy mood when I wrote that...but anyhow, thanks, I'm so glad you like it! :glomp:

 

Good length.....good free verse.....but the atmosphere.....don't really like it....but don't let that affect your thoughts.....your thoughts and feelings....your poems....keep them up....

 

lol Thanks...although these aren't really my feelings...I was happy when I wrote this, but I just wanted to write this for some really weird reason, but anyway, thanks. XD

 

I know you aren´t upset, but I am, I truly want to kill someone in this moment, and I am too kinda depressed, but anyways, is very good, but a little long.

 

I'm glad you like it, and since this was practically my very first poem when I was younger, it has some mistakes...

And it's alright, Chaser, I'm here for you. :) *hugs*

 

ZOMG NYMPHY YOUR POEM IS SO LONG!

But I love it. Great job. Oh wow. I love how it ends.

*huggles*
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lol Yeah, this was like, one of my longest poems ever. XD But anyhow, I'm glad you like it! :) *hugs*

 

Your longest ever? Well it is really good!

You should write long poems more often. I like them.

Again, great job.
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Thanks. :) And I'll try...depending on when the inspiration hits. XD The last longest poem I was able to write though, was "My Past Lover"...

 

ZOMG this poem is so good XDDDD i love it Nymph

 

Thanks, glad you like it! :glomp:​

 

Wow that was awesome! *tears* lol You should write like that more often! And honestly, depressing poems sound a hell of a lot better to me than happy poems for some reason! o.O I wonder why...xDD​

 

Thanks! And well, I do write a lot of depressing poems...at least I think so...I have to go check. XD But anyway, to me, I like depressing poems better as well...they just have more feeling and impact...but then again, happy poems cheer you up, and I like that a lot...lol Anyway, thanks, I'm glad you like it! :D :glomp:​