The Forgotten Saga. [OOC]

The Forgotten saga is based on Birth By sleep, But instead of Ventus, I'm Irritum, Irritum is a clone of ventus but with black hair and holds his keyblade, the oathkeeper, with two hands, also Irritum's personality is serious, humor, and friendly.

To join in please add a character name, the characters keyblade and personality.

Thanks, I hope we can roleplay soon.

 

I'm sorry, but in order to get this RP going you need to write a story and make it interesting instead of "it's based on BBS" because it doesn't catch attention. You will also need a list of playable characters, an OC sheet, rules, etc.

 

Moved to OOC so you can get some more help with fleshing this out! It needs a bit more content. You can find some guidelines here.

 

That's pretty confusing, you don't really explain what the RP itself is. It's not a bad idea but it doesn't seem very fleshed out. Try typing up a paragraph explaining how exactly the OCs will fit into the story of Birth by Sleep.
I'd also like to recommend making a layout for character submissions, as is mentioned in the guidelines.
For yours, I would also think you should have a tab for appearance. It lets you get a good feel of how they look early on.

 

I have to agree with everyone here, the story needs some work. Saying it's based off BBS doesn't really lure people in, especially those who haven't played it. You need some kind of story, some interesting paragraph or two to really catch the reader's eye. Even if these paragraphs are just a short synopsis of BBS, though spoilers would be a bad idea to include because some people take them very seriously, it'll make the roleplay look more... interesting, and professional I suppose.

Perhaps make a character sheet that includes some things like: Username, Character's Name, Age, Gender, Appearance, Biography, Personality, Keyblade, etc. It gives the roleplayer a chance to use their imagination, but still keep the roleplay neat and organized.

Oh, and some rules would be great as well. Every roleplay needs guidelines, so that would also be a great idea!

If you need anymore help, feel free to contact me personally and we can work one-on-one if you like. Or find some other Roleplay Helpers here!

I think you have a great idea for a roleplay, it just needs a little work. c:

 

ok thnx i'm a total noob,

Could you help?

 

Of course! Just drop me a Conversation (PM) or a Status (VM) and I'll help you as soon as I can!

Oh, and the reason I'm saying this is because I might have to go to bed soon, but yeah, anytime is great for me! c:

 

Thnx

 

Yipes! What have we here?
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This is gonna need a lot more than "based off BBS but instead of Ventus I'm irritum." You'll need to add exactly what the story is goin to be and what is going to happen. Plus, you'll need a format (or OC Sheet) for incoming characters. Don't just rush to create an RP, I can tell you from experience that the longer you take, the better (just don't mention it to anyone unless they are helping with it, otherwise people may lose interest). If you need anything else AT ALL, don't hesitate to contact me.

 

Ty i'll appreciate the help